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Cirivio
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| Joined: 23 Jun 2012 |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:38 PM |
| Salsa, just destroy him already.. |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:39 PM |
lol arguing over who goes first
challenger goes first |
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corfish67
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| Joined: 26 Feb 2010 |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:39 PM |
Yo yo my rhythms are tight, so is my bite, stole your light, now run with fright.
Boom. |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:39 PM |
-Sign-
You want me to go first? Well fine, have it your way. I just hope you know you'll be beat by the end of the day.
Oh, don't try and pulla EIW, posting everything at once. Once you do that, you'd become a dunce.
This is what they've been waiting for, a you VS. me. Now please, let us show them I am the bees knees. |
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trituse
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corfish67
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:41 PM |
Just so you know, bee's knee's are quite fragile and can be broken/harmed with minimal force. Also bee's are quite weak creatures, the venom in their stings isn't too strong, and once they sting they're dead. You may want to rethink your lyrics next time.
Besides, I already won this fight with my post, narbs. |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:43 PM |
You think you scored? Ha thats lame.
Its like you don't even know the rapping game.
Learn this one, i'm the king. I can beat whatever you bring. |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:43 PM |
"You want me to go first? Well fine, have it your way. I just hope you know you'll be beat by the end of the day."
Dude, you had a perfect McDonalds reference set up and you missed it. I'm disappointed. That was a bad rap bro. |
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corfish67
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:44 PM |
Alan, king and bring don't rhyme.
Please learn proper pronunciation before you attempted a lyrical rhyme battle. |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:45 PM |
@cor
Raps use slant rhymes. Nice try though. |
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blaze7067
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:46 PM |
| lol c&g is so embarrassing right now |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:46 PM |
Ha, you see, Eminem was right. I could of used the MIkky-D to my hinesight.
End of the day-Could of called you a "Mc-Fluray."
Whipped around, spinned upside down, looking like a hideous clown. Trying to put me down? I'll come back around, and next time i'll show you how to put someone down. |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:46 PM |
both of these are boring not the worst but still boring sorry but when i critique lyrics im completely honest |
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Cirivio
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| Joined: 23 Jun 2012 |
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| 17 Aug 2013 09:47 PM |
Alan, your lyrics are wack, good raps are what it lacks, To your girl I'll give a whack, You can't rap, don't try to act black. |
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