Zora1232
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| 14 Aug 2013 05:22 PM |
Before we begin, I just want to tell you that this made up CreepyPasta may not be as scary. Rate it like this: Cruddy. Lame. Pretty creepy Creepy Scary Scared Freaked out.
I was playing Minecraft PE in the morning, and I thought I saw a long, red tail near my cobblestone house (which inspired me to write this), but it was just my imagination. Also, don't take it seriously. It's one of my own imaginary stories. Please tell me of what you thought of the story, and also tell me where I could use improvements. Thanks.
MINECRAFT PE (ft. Jeff the Killer and Smiledog):
I know that Minecraft PE isn't good as the Xbox version or the computer version, but I like to play it when I'm not in my house. Normally, I'd sit down somewhere, and play the app, and BAM! Minutes have passed. Minecraft PE is my timekiller. But after you read this story, you may not want to play Minecraft PE again. Anyway, it all started when I was in the subway train. It would take 15 minutes to get back to my apartment, but it was long for me. I pulled out my iPhone and started playing.
I decided to play a game on Survival mode, so I created one and named it "Survival 101", but when I closed the keyboard on the screen, the title was renamed as "GO BACK". I thought it was some glitch, so I shrugged and started playing. The first thing to do was chop down a tree. I looked around for a tree- there it was. I ran over to it and started chopping with my hand. Surprisingly, I heard a scream that didn't come from my phone. It was nearby. I looked away from my iPhone and saw a woman lying on the floor, a cold hand reaching out for me and her frozen body messily coated in blood. I was stunned. "What is just happening?" I think, puzzled. I go back to chopping trees, more screaming ringing my ears.
I look at the floor again and all the passengers around me are dead. My eyes widen and I start to panic. "Is there some killer...?" I shrug again and go back to playing Minecraft PE. I start arranging the wooden blocks to build my house. When I look on the floor again, 5 bodies have disappeared. "Now this is just getting crazy...." My spine shakes and I almost drop my iPhone. But I try to keep going.
Once my house is built, it is night. I had crafted a bed and placed it in the corner. I walked over and fell asleep in the bed. To my surprise, suddenly everything becomes black and I pass out.
"Wake up. Wake up." I feel something shaking me awake. A old man looks at me. "Where is all the passengers?" I ask. "You dropped this, didn't you?" the old man hands me my iPhone. I just stare at him. "We have arrived. Everyone has gone off the train. And you seem to be the only one left, my young man." He says before walking away. The doors automatically open and I walk out, realizing that I wasn't at my stop. Right in front of me was a bench. It looked like I had to wait for the next train. I grabbed a ticket and sat right down to continue playing. When I looked outside of my wooden house, it was day. It was time to upgrade!
I started to go mining for a few minutes. When I came back to my wooden house, I saw something weird at the corner. A red, mixed with black, tail. It slid away from the screen and then disappeared. Curiously, I headed over there, but there was nothing. It was just my imagination.
Night fell again, so I went inside. Before the screen went dark, I could see the wooden door open... Revealing a figure with a weird face I almost couldn't see. Text appeared on the screen that read "You are next..." I jumped out of bed. And I screamed in real life. I was staring at a HIDEOUS FACE! A face with completely white skin. A face with wide eyes. A face with a red smile as if someone had carved it into his face. White text appeared on the screen that read "Go to sleep......" I was too surprised to go back to sleep in my minecraft bed. Before I knew it, he raised a silver knife and hit me with it. Surprisingly, I felt pain in my stomach as if I was stabbed. I shake and tremble before dropping the iPhone and passed out again.
When I wake up, I find myself in the Hospital. They say it's been 3 days and my stomach wound will heal.
Back at school, I tell my friends about what had happened. And they didn't believe me until I told them that I got stabbed, just like I was hit in the game. My friends told me then that the face I saw belonged to a killer called "Jeff the Killer" and they also explained the red tail was from Smiledog, Jeff's pet. I was then told to go on the site "CreepyPasta" and read it for myself. I was scared when I was finished reading their horrid stories.
From that day forward, I never touched that Minecraft PE app again. |
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| 14 Aug 2013 05:24 PM |
Cruddy
Is there a single Minecraft creepypasta that doesn't have the main villain sucking the hero into the game or coming out of the game and injuring/cursing/killing them? |
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Zora1232
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| 14 Aug 2013 05:25 PM |
@tomboy Hmm..... I have no idea. |
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