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Re: My Ad, So pretty.

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TryHardNinja13 is not online. TryHardNinja13
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14 Aug 2013 11:59 AM
http://t0.rbxcdn.com/7d4310af745c5029d78e73d6781e40f7

Its a roblox link so its aloud right?
Please dont ban me i didnt know :c

-Battleman3000Alt
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Fuzion217 is not online. Fuzion217
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14 Aug 2013 12:00 PM
Dat ad. :3

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Superdogiepoop is not online. Superdogiepoop
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14 Aug 2013 01:00 PM
Looks good.
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14 Aug 2013 02:01 PM
Trippy.
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jd678 is not online. jd678
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14 Aug 2013 02:56 PM
Extremely simple, and extremely boring.

http://wiki.roblox.com/index.php?title=How_to_Design_an_Effective_Ad
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Superdogiepoop is not online. Superdogiepoop
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14 Aug 2013 04:36 PM
rly, jd?
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CoolDude80967 is not online. CoolDude80967
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14 Aug 2013 05:12 PM
Well, it's certainly umm it's really kind of messy. The effects you used add extra light and the text was light and everything was light so I could barely read it. That Mandelbrot Fractal effect you used from Paint.NET is overused and it kind of ruins every shirt and decal etc. If you have a light background then don't use a light text. Man, that's basic graphic designing.
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jd678 is not online. jd678
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14 Aug 2013 09:22 PM
@Super

Yes really, and here is my Reason:

First of all, what CoolDude said,
Secondly, it has no color,
Thirdly, very basic and simple to use PDN effects
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EnterBoringNameHere is not online. EnterBoringNameHere
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14 Aug 2013 11:19 PM
What jd said.
Also that robloxian coming out of the corner is so common.
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youtube18511 is not online. youtube18511
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14 Aug 2013 11:21 PM
jd, would you consider this to be simple?

pic.twitter.com/1joGD35qqd
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jd678 is not online. jd678
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15 Aug 2013 12:01 AM
@YT

no, I already gave you a 10 on that if you would read your own threads.
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jd678 is not online. jd678
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15 Aug 2013 12:03 AM
Well, actually I would consider it simple yes.

Basic - no
Advanced - yes

Yours is very well done, and has features that appear simple but not easy to pull off.

In some cases simple is good -gets to the point - looks neater - etc
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15 Aug 2013 12:28 AM
Sorry, xD my thread was deleted before I could look at it again :P
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Fuzion217 is not online. Fuzion217
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15 Aug 2013 08:38 AM
Coming from a graphic designer, I'd say it's nice, but it'd looks better with more color and contrast. It's good, especially from someone who's not completely experienced with graphic design, but it can be improved.

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streetx is not online. streetx
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15 Aug 2013 08:52 AM
Looks good!
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CoolDude80967 is not online. CoolDude80967
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15 Aug 2013 09:15 AM
Fuzion, may we see some of your designs?
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Fuzion217 is not online. Fuzion217
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15 Aug 2013 10:07 AM
@Cool

https://twitter.com/Fuzion217RBLX/status/361499237311205376/photo/1

This is my most recent one. :3

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CoolDude80967 is not online. CoolDude80967
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15 Aug 2013 10:41 AM
Seems legit, i searched it on "Tineye" and it had no other results nice work. Yet, this is too bright too messy it could be improved but the whole picture will have to be re-arranged and re-colored.
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