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| 11 Aug 2013 09:03 AM |
Say you wake up in the middle of the night, and you have to go the bathroom. You walk down the hall. You feel strange, almost as if there was a presence. You speed up a little bit, rushing for the bathroom. You enter the bathroom and you just don't feel the need to go the bathroom. You turn around. You turn of the bathroom lights, flickering while doing so. You run out of the bathroom as quickly as you could into you room. You get in bed. You feel warm. Hot. Almost if someone was watching you. You try to fall asleep. You can't. You then go under the sheets, and fall asleep(Eventually) Then, all of the sudden, you wake up screaming and covered in sweat. You weren't in bed. You were in some-other place covered in what seemed like ropes. A giant web. You try breaking free of the web. You're stuck. You then see a giant creature, with long arms and a slender body. It crawled with black spiders crawling all over it, staring at you with its blue eyes an pale face. Its head twisting in unimaginable ways. Its runs over to you on its 4 feet. It smiles with all its sharp teeth while you scream in horror, ATLAS... You wake up :>
See you tomorrow -Night horror
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| 11 Aug 2013 09:47 AM |
bump. Slurp this pls
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| 11 Aug 2013 09:50 AM |
It was okay, but I've got a bathroom attached to my room so I don't walk down the corridor.
The story it's bad.
But it became less scary when the spider thing came up. |
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| 11 Aug 2013 09:52 AM |
Thanks. You can build off this if you want
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| 11 Aug 2013 09:54 AM |
Might make a good movie, like the ring. But I don't make very good stories
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| 11 Aug 2013 10:01 AM |
| I would use it, but right now I'm working on a sniper story, rather than horror. |
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