nightdumo
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| 09 Aug 2013 09:06 PM |
I know Valve will not use this idea. It took me about 35 minutes to make this if anything is weird. Now, GLaDOS has to clean up the mess in her room.
CHAPTER 1: The Prank Chell was walking along, thinking of what to do after she was "released". Suddenly she hit a wall. She obviously couldn't get past it, even going left or right wouldn't help. Suddenly the walls turned into metal. GLaDOs said "Oh, did you really think I would let you go like that?" A ladder comes down from the roof. "Go climb up the ladder, I promise I won't BURN you, I won't drop you into ACID, I won't SHOOT you." Chell climbed up hoping she is near to being released for REAL.
CHAPTER 2: The Return Meanwhile as Wheatley was in space, he spotted a rocketship heading strait for him. "Oh no... OH NOOO-" He hit the front of the rocket. Wheatley was rolling down the side and hit a control panel. He attached himself to a loose wire and was holding on for dear life. "I AM GOING TO BLOODY DIE..." As the ship entered the atmosphere, Wheatley fell off the ship and somehow, landed in Aperture.
CHAPTER 3: The New "Portal Gun" Chell reached a new floor. A crane came down with two gloves. "This is the new portal gun, or I should say 'Portal Gloves.'" Chell heard another voice. "Hello? Can anybody hear me?" It sounded like Wheatley, and it probably could be. It seemed to be coming from that new test chamber. Chell went forward to find out it WAS Wheatley!
CHAPTER 4: The Part Where You Test GLaDOS said "These are the NEWER test chambers." Of course, the first one is a cube and button. There are TONS of more tests, and 20% of them are IMPOSSIBLE. So let's just get back to the story. "If you can complete 15 chambers, I will give you a slice of the cake. Does that sound fair?" But of course, Chell couldn't answer. And she was at test chamber 15/26. Like GLaDOS said, she got the cake.
CHAPTER 5: Bye bye, GLaDOS! (The longest chapter) Like all stories, there is a villain and a hero. And the hero of course defeats the villain. But this time, GLaDOS has gone to MaDDOS... I bet you are wondering how. So Chell was testing, like she should be, and she ate the cake, and so she was so TIRED from testing. Wheatley said they are not doing the same thing like they did last time or Wheatley will end up in space again. What are the odds of getting hit by a rocketship and landing in Aperture? So anyways, Chell and Wheatley were testing, while Wheatley just followed and helped with anything he could. Chell got angry, and decided she had to destroy GLaDOS once and for all, even though Wheatley couldn't understand what she was trying to do. Chell shot some portals to find GLaDOS again. It seemed her idea is so crazy, it just might work. Wheatley just watched without a clue what was going on, and Chell found out that she can put portals on GLaDOS. (Up at the top, that part.)
CHAPTER 6: Atlas helps out! Atlas comes rushing into the room, he was tired from testing like Chell was. Together they shot portals on the top part of GLaDOS. Wheatley said "Are you doing something really cool, or doing something really bad?" GLaDOS replied to Wheatley "Probably something bad." Chell aimed over an incinerator, and Atlas aimed over another one. They shot portals at the same time. "NoooOOOOoOOO!" It somehow started burning GLaDOS, as weird as that plan was, I don't see how it worked.
Chapter 7: We're all done here. And now, GLaDOS released Chell for REAL, and Wheatley, Atlas, and P-Body were set free, and Wheatley was made into a better robot, that almost looked similar to Atlas. Chell was free to do what she wants to. And that was the story.
Rate the story from 1-10! This actually took a little bit longer than 35 minutes. Remember to ONLY, and I mean ONLY rate it if you read the whole thing. I bet you're thinking this is crappy. XP kthxbai |
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JoelsM4A1
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| 09 Aug 2013 09:06 PM |
| SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SPOILERS SRELIOPS |
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| 09 Aug 2013 09:06 PM |
I bet you're thinking this is crappy.
Damn right. |
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nightdumo
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| 09 Aug 2013 09:07 PM |
@joels might have wanted to put that in title |
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PinkFlare
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| 09 Aug 2013 09:09 PM |
| imo chapter 1 was the only good one. |
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nightdumo
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| 09 Aug 2013 09:09 PM |
ye dis is crrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap |
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OTDIALGA
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OperaMini
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| 09 Aug 2013 09:24 PM |
tl;dr
On the other hand, I'm left-handed. |
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