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Mr44
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| 07 Aug 2013 05:02 PM |
I can think of three:
1) It's short. 2) It's a sarcastic parody of Creepypastas. 3) Way too vague ("bad things happened").
Personally, I'm surprised that Creepypasta Wiki has standards. |
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Gary141
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| 07 Aug 2013 05:49 PM |
| it wasn't clever and it wasn't a good parody |
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Gary141
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| 07 Aug 2013 05:53 PM |
oh it just seemed like a parody because it had a lot of things in common with other creepy pastas but you stripped the cliches down just to the bones to make is more obvious and straighforward, but I dunno
I guess if it's serious it's better than if it's a parody, but it's still barely a story. You can tell a story that's the short, but yours doesn't really |
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| 07 Aug 2013 06:37 PM |
| Interesting, but not scary in the least bit. |
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| 07 Aug 2013 06:39 PM |
The first one is too short, not bad, but not creepy. The second one is interesting, but not creepy. |
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bigmac40
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| 07 Aug 2013 11:48 PM |
| And so the war has found his homeland! |
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| 08 Aug 2013 01:16 AM |
| Well don't post random crap on the wiki. You're not showing your wit or class by doing it. The wiki is under the control of tyrannical moderators anyway. |
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| 08 Aug 2013 03:15 AM |
I wouldn't take any of the admins of the Creepypasta wikia seriously anyway. I mean every time I visit one of their pages I can't help, but laugh, they're those 2dark4u people that think being insane is cool and edgy. Screw 'em.
There's a Trollpasta website anyway post your shiz on that. |
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| 08 Aug 2013 07:55 AM |
| The Creepypasta admins are story-natsies. I mean they've set proper guidelines on how to write a creepypasta and how your plot should be! |
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| 08 Aug 2013 08:20 AM |
@Elysium
The Cleric guy is also pretty egotistical. I guess these are people you just have to put up with in life.
@Mario
Other than that thought Wikia is a pretty neat and easily accessible system. |
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