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xxAzelea is not online. xxAzelea
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06 Aug 2013 01:11 AM
read it
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fathat121 is not online. fathat121
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06 Aug 2013 02:17 AM
The bumping is making me feel as though this thread was created to troll roleplayers.
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xxAzelea is not online. xxAzelea
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06 Aug 2013 05:49 AM
Do you see all of the story that I put there?
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xxAzelea is not online. xxAzelea
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07 Aug 2013 05:49 AM
Oh, come on, guys! 227 views and still 27 posts? You can do better than this.
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fathat121 is not online. fathat121
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07 Aug 2013 07:06 AM
A well written plot doesn't even matter; if you don't take the time to arrange it.

[Harsh Criticism]
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LOLZmanisEPICxD is not online. LOLZmanisEPICxD
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07 Aug 2013 12:22 PM
I read it but i have NO CLUE WHAT SO EVER to put...i would make a character sheet but i dont even know what to put on it! I cant think of some Si-Fi disease for my character! Give us some more! Make some more! D:<
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xxAzelea is not online. xxAzelea
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08 Aug 2013 01:42 AM
do something yourself for once, guys.
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fathat121 is not online. fathat121
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08 Aug 2013 05:34 AM
You don't get the "point" of writing. You must write in a way, so that your readers may comprehend you ideas; without complying themselves; within the process. A good writer takes the effort to think about how their audience will react. Never be selfish; in thinking.
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xxAzelea is not online. xxAzelea
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10 Aug 2013 09:02 AM
>"You must write in a way"
>"in a way"

You know what I think? I think you're giving this way too much credit, buddy-boy.
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fathat121 is not online. fathat121
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10 Aug 2013 07:50 PM
All right. Fair enough. Your style is what matters most. I can not argue; with that.
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xxAzelea is not online. xxAzelea
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19 Aug 2013 03:31 AM
Whoopsie-daisy! The patient is dead!

"Thank you, Doctor Azzyfaic!"
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xxAzelea is not online. xxAzelea
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09 Oct 2013 12:05 PM
bumppp
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