xxAzelea
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| 05 Aug 2013 08:14 AM |
Paradise aka The Children in Paradise Hospital
IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY AGNOSTIC CONTENT PLEASE LEAVE NOW. Thank you.
Somewhere. N̶o̶t̶ Very, very far away. ---
In the Aerugino ward, there was only her, and Evie, and one other child way at the other end where she could barely see. At first there had been ten or twenty of them. Now they were the only ones left.
A few weeks ago, so many children had been dying that Doctor and Nurse had put cords in the ceiling and put the children on the cords. Then they'd hoisted the children sideways over the walls. Ema had seen their blood drip down their feet and onto her white hospital smock. Sometimes the children had fallen apart before they'd been hoisted all the way to the Morgue (which was where Doctor said the dead children went), and then they'd splatted on the floor. This was a disease that turned children into bloody mush. Ema and Evie were also turning into bloody mush. Doctor and Nurse had once tried to explain to them exactly what the disease was.
"It's like there's a plant," Nurse said eagerly, "or maybe lots of plants—and it grows up inside your body—"
"What are you talking about?" Doctor scoffed. "Now listen here, kid 23, kid 24. This disease is like lots of little red demons that eat the insides of little kids…and they're so small they're invisible, and they float through the air. And when you take a breath—" he demonstrated—"some of them get sucked in." "And then they attack your body!" Nurse said with an energetic jab in the air.
"And then you start to turn to mush," Evie added.
"And your hair falls out," Ema said, touching her fuzz-covered scalp.
"And then you go crazy," Evie retorted, spinning a finger around her ear.
Nurse laughed. "Yes, that's right!"
Doctor and Nurse seemed awfully happy for people whose job was putting children on cords. The boy in bed number 22 had said darkly that they were probably getting paid lots for it, but then he had died the same afternoon and they'd put him on cords too. Evie romantically supposed that Doctor and Nurse were getting married, which also seemed like a good explanation. Or it was possible that Doctor and Nurse just didn't notice how bad everything really was, or maybe they didn't even care whether the children died or not. That was what Ema thought. For a doctor, Doctor didn't seem to be very good at curing people. Maybe he wasn't even supposed to, and the entire hospital was actually a Morgue.
"It's only morning," Ema whimpered. "…I think." "I feel really bad, though," Evie said. The orange-blonde hair that had once floated around her head was falling out more every day. Her white arms were so thin; she'd stopped eating a few days ago. "I feel all twisty and sloshy inside…" She pulled herself to a sitting position. "I think I'm gonna barf." That day Evie died and Ema cried so much she couldn't hear anything but Nurse telling her something a cold, clinical voice. She thought it was her name, but she wasn't sure.
Ema didn't leave the bed anymore; she was afraid her legs were too weak. She had seen another little girl's legs snap, when she had tried to get up out of bed and her legs couldn't take it. Her bones had been red. They'd rotted away before the skin had.
So Ema didn't really want to leave.
"No need to wish the stormy skies aren't here anymore, Ema. You'll be alright-" Nurse hesitated a moment- "with time. You're going to go to a place where there are no grey skies, and no thunder, and no scary faces anymore, and you'll be happy," Nurse said softly, and unstrapped the small, fragile child-Ema's-oxygen mask. "You're going to paradise, sweetie." --- Paradise Hospital. A place of whimsical birds and fairies and cherries and stray Rapunzel hairs stemming from the core of pure kindness. The year is 4198. Scientists in the medical field have developed a technology that will-when hooked up-give children an illusion if they are dying or dead. It is the illusion of a stereotypical paradise, lightly tweaked to fit some's desires. However, (there's always a however, you fools.) like Disney movies, the Paradise is not always what it seems to be. You know Snow White? Yeah, in the original story, the step-Queen was forced to dance in burning hot iron shoes. Seriously. Nothing more to expect, right? After all, Paradise technology is in the beta stage. These are just innocent children waiting to die.. what worse could happen than being dead, right? Trapped in an endless black place of nothing, or whatever being dead is like, I don't really know. Maybe it's good. But what happens when a fatal error occurs and children are forced to design an in-paradise-name (IPN) to prevent identity glitches, locked up in seperate cages with low Paradise illusion level, forced into an "escape" scenario to prove their sentience, and then risk it all just to live again?
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name - ipn - personality - gender - appearance - tweaks - hospital story - disease -
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no character control (without permission) no auto (no "no miss" or "always dodge") what I say goes as grammatically correct as possible. no l33t speak, no ignoring punctuation, and always make sure things are spelled right. It just makes you look like an idiot, and the other peeps will end up silently frustrated with you. this also includes not naming your character something long, ridiculous, and is unable to be pronounced by any mortal tongue. ignore trolls post as often as you can avoid mary sues.. as much as you can. i will allow a few "perfect" characters, but only a few. ONLY A FEW. OONNLYYYYYY AAAAAA FFFFEEEWWWW. use OOC with OOC: or (()) or () or {} or [].. you get the idea. no uncanny knowledge. such as: P1: (Hey, guys, Ema's about to die.) P2: "..I sense that my best friend ever totally I know her so much man its like we were born together Ema is about to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Paradise. Coming August 2013. (hopefully.)
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xxAzelea
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Sahanke
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| 05 Aug 2013 08:52 AM |
| (So when it says Coming August 2013, does that mean it is not open yet or what?) |
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xxAzelea
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| 05 Aug 2013 08:53 AM |
(it's open, go ahead and do whatever you're gonna do) (also BUMP, THE MUSICAL) |
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xxAzelea
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| 05 Aug 2013 09:42 AM |
| bump bump bump bump bump bump im so bumpin bump bump bumpin bumpppp bump my life |
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xxAzelea
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xxAzelea
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| 05 Aug 2013 10:58 AM |
BUMP bump BUMP bump BUMP BUMP: THE BUMP THEATRE BY BUMP BUMP
BUMP UPON A BUMP THERE BUMPED A BUMP WHO LIVED WITH SEVEN BUMPS IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE THE BUMPIN END |
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xxAzelea
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| 05 Aug 2013 11:09 AM |
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| 05 Aug 2013 11:43 AM |
There's a flaw with the agnostic content warning.
No one needs to know that, because no irreligious/religious person would be offended.
Also, you will not get joins if you spam bump. |
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xxAzelea
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| 05 Aug 2013 11:46 AM |
| Captain Obvious, you can go back home now. |
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Quasar99
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| 05 Aug 2013 11:51 AM |
is paradise hospital supposed to be like an illusion of heaven or
"Fire is the leading cause of fire." - Dr. Doofenshmirtz |
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| 05 Aug 2013 11:51 AM |
| I'm so going to join after I finish the story instead of read a few parts xD |
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| 05 Aug 2013 12:07 PM |
| I have no clue what to post...i want to be in this and the storyline is great but i am so confused >.< |
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| 05 Aug 2013 12:27 PM |
So now you resort to flaming?
Such a short fuse. |
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Quasar99
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| 05 Aug 2013 12:29 PM |
...and she flamed you how?
"Fire is the leading cause of fire." - Dr. Doofenshmirtz |
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| 05 Aug 2013 12:41 PM |
| >Captain Obvious, you can go back home now. |
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Quasar99
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| 05 Aug 2013 12:46 PM |
thats not flame.
"Fire is the leading cause of fire." - Dr. Doofenshmirtz |
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| 05 Aug 2013 01:26 PM |
flame
flamebait
or just pure nonsense, it was not needed |
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iExel
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| 05 Aug 2013 03:06 PM |
It's not bad. It has a great concept and structure.
Just flagging it. Making a CS later.
"I propose a philosophical question. Am I too brainy for you?" |
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xxAzelea
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| 06 Aug 2013 12:08 AM |
just cs, people also thank you also flames will be used to keep me warm in the winter also i love you all also also also also BUMP |
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| 06 Aug 2013 12:23 AM |
(I would join but most of the stuff i don't understand... D:)
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