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| 04 Aug 2013 05:08 PM |
Ok, So I have this game And I want to get Lots of place visits, I am Not very good at Ads I use Fotoflexxer I have tried paint.net Its confusing :/ I currently have 151 Tix I used to have more then 1500 But lost it to Limited Trade currency :(
Heres my game: http://www.roblox.com/Ro-tercycle-Racing-READ-DESC-place?id=112728351
Its a racing game, I cant make badges and Gamepasses So For an Admin Gamepass I just made a place but made the game acess(Buy and I will add you to the admin list) Its 175 Robux, I Invite my friends to the game And then Some other people sometimes randomly join
Please reply Anything I need to do To make it better I need some advice For the game I Want to make a good game so If you can Give me some Tips that would be Cool :) |
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ikmae
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| 04 Aug 2013 05:13 PM |
Not really the place to post this, but I'll reply.
I'm not very good at making ads either, but it doesnt matter as long as you get the main idea across. It doesn't have to be fancy. Just like, "Ro-tercyle Racing! Play now and race!" Bid as much tickets as you can, the more the merier. If you still don't get visits, (Just be patient, though) invite a bunch of friends and play, odds are you'll get guests and players surfing the game pages and they might see it!
I know I once had a friend of mine test a game, and guests came in. After the guests, a couple players came. Its not a popular game, but there were people. If I had motivated people and put the ads up with more tickets, and actually bothered with working on the game, people would have come. |
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| 04 Aug 2013 05:18 PM |
Oh, and, constantly update your game. Always take feedback and put as much time and effort into it. Free models are okay, but not too many. Okay that is all. |
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| 04 Aug 2013 05:35 PM |
I do Always Update the game when I have time, I once invited some friends and like 2 guests joined followed by like 4 Players. :D
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| 04 Aug 2013 05:35 PM |
I do Always Update the game when I have time, I once invited some friends and like 2 guests joined followed by like 4 Players. :D
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| 04 Aug 2013 05:38 PM |
| You are allowed to use "free models".. But I advice to make your own.. |
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| 04 Aug 2013 08:01 PM |
Also Guys Can You play it and Reply In the comments What you think of it Or just reply What Should be added.
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| 05 Aug 2013 12:17 AM |
I looked at the picture, so I probably cant say anything, but I will, the picture makes it look a little... not to good. In the background, the sky is that default sky (there is nothing wrong with it) and there is the regular gray baseplate. Those two together make the game look like a bunch of free models put in a world freshly spawned. I recommend making it grass and removing that sky, or if you don't want to make it grass, enclose the area and make it like a stone arena (get rid of the studs, unless that was intentional) Ill check the game later and give you more useful info. But the main point of this was to tell you that people will judge it by its cover. Even if its wrong, they'll do so. |
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| 05 Aug 2013 12:47 PM |
I Am Trying to make the baseplate look like Grass because Its type is Grass and Its color is Green, I'll look for a different sky To add in It. Btw thanks for the help. |
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| 05 Aug 2013 03:04 PM |
I looked at it, and here is what I say about it:
First, the map. It looks a little plain, and a little too... "newbie" as one may put it. I think you should build a lobby area, where players spawn and can hang out and watch the races. Have it be a neat spawn, with things like past times. Like those little round balls players can push around like in the Hide and Seek game, or small obstacles players can do while they wait for someone to come or something.
Second, the guis. The music gui clearly tells you that it is a free model and the game would be cheap. Im not asking for you to get rid of it, I'm saying that you should edit it so maybe the name crazy(whatever it was) would be yours, and change the colors of it.
Okay. I think I covered most of what you should fix and all. Remember; you don't need to do what I say. It is your game. |
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| 05 Aug 2013 03:14 PM |
Try to use free model if you can't build it, but use as few as possible that way few people will notice free model |
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| 05 Aug 2013 03:51 PM |
Ik I Will Change the colors, I will make my own color-changing-wall Lobby And Maybe make a small obby/Moving balls Like on hide and seek, I will also try and add a tic-tac-toe Giver so People can Play games with each other. :D You guys are all Helping me out on this Thank you for replying and Telling me what I need to change.
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| 05 Aug 2013 04:30 PM |
| Just make it a false title game. Then you'll get all the idiotic ODing nobs coming to your place. |
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| 05 Aug 2013 04:31 PM |
| This is not Help, this is greed. |
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| 05 Aug 2013 04:32 PM |
@Above Er........ Umm Dude Get out >_< |
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