axelvts
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| 31 Jul 2013 10:47 AM |
Rules: 1) You only get to use ONE sentence/ dialog.
2) Stay on topic, you can do plot twists, but make it a clear change,not like:
One day harry went to Walmart. So he drove to the moon.
It would have to be:
One day Harry went to Walmart. And then he saw a Space ship! So he decided to get in. AND THEN HE SAW A SPIDER! "Kill it with fire!" he yelled! So he slapped it, and hit a button. And the rocket took him to the moon!
3) You can only add to the story once someone has gone right before you, and you can only post behind your own reply if you need to fix it, or you are commenting to someone else's post. But try not to be mean.
4) Dialog consists of the words that the person is saying within the " " symbols, and then how they say it: like: He yelled, she replied, They asked. SOMETHING like that.
5) Try to drag the story on for MANY pages, meaning don't kill everyone right away, and save the main character for the end.
6) Stay on track, don't turn this forum game into a discussion about your hatred of MLP... Because I love that show. :P
Try to make your post understandable. And I hope you can try to change this story around ALOT but in a smooth transitional way.
I'll start this off:
One day, a 14 year old girl named Erica was playing in her room.
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| 31 Jul 2013 10:56 AM |
| She saw something very terrible happening outside. |
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| 31 Jul 2013 10:59 AM |
| There was a guy being attacked by aperture turrets |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:04 AM |
| So the girl went outside and ate a cupcake. |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:05 AM |
Im confused already :c.
So then the aperture turrets stole her cupcaik |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:10 AM |
| And so she stole a ballon. |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:12 AM |
| so then the girl used her laser vision |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:13 AM |
| But the clinic was closed. |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:13 AM |
| And she burnt herself using laser vision |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:14 AM |
THEN SHE WAS A ZOMBIE
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:15 AM |
| So since she was a zombie she had to eat her moms brain. |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:16 AM |
| She run to her mom but she was in the house, and the door was locked. |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:16 AM |
| so she went threw the window |
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| 31 Jul 2013 11:17 AM |
| and threw it across the room |
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