kidbloom
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| 30 Jul 2013 05:44 PM |
Fun Ghoul woke up. He put his hand on the top of his forehead. “Ugh, I hate headaches...” He said. Kobra found his helmet and put it on. We survived death, but Jet Star doesn't look so good.... Jet Star started to sweat and wimper. “We have to put him out of his misery...” I said. Everyone stared at me, nodding. I grabbed a gun from on the ground. “I'm sorry Jet.” I aimmed the gun at him and shot him. I fell on my knees, remembering the pain in my head. I screamed. WHY DOES IT HURT SO BAD? I thought over and over again. I put both of my hands on my head, covering my ears. Kobra rushed over to me, trying to see what was wrong. “We have to get out of here, quick! Grab whatever food is here. NOW!” Kobra started yelling commands at Fun Ghoul. Kobra hung me from his shoulder and went outside to find a car. He tried every car but only one worked. Fun came out moments later with a mountain of food a found where me and Kobra were at. “So this is the car we are using?” He asked. After that I blacked out.
Dat long paragraph xD
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kidbloom
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| 30 Jul 2013 06:14 PM |
| your right, this is even more stupid. |
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kidbloom
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| 30 Jul 2013 06:20 PM |
| XD. I hate you xD.. So much, that I want to destroy you... Maybe drown you and cut you, like Dr. Stein from Soul Eater... I must dissect you... |
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1Riblock1
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| 30 Jul 2013 06:35 PM |
Trying to go screamo on people doesn't work Try industrial or groove |
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 06:37 PM |
"XD. I hate you xD.. So much, that I want to destroy you... Maybe drown you and cut you, like Dr. Stein from Soul Eater... I must dissect you..."
kidbloom eat a snickers you turn into a butthurt scene kid when you're hungry |
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johnb
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| 30 Jul 2013 06:38 PM |
| Thank you for this long anticipated continuation |
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kidbloom
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 06:52 PM |
| why are you writing fanfiction anyway |
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kidbloom
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:01 PM |
@Crash6351
Because, I thought it would be fun... It's hard.... |
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:11 PM |
"It's hard...."
writing fanfiction isn't hard any idiot can pair two guys and have them do each other in the butt constantly |
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kidbloom
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:13 PM |
| ... It's hard making a fkn fan fic that somebody will like... |
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:14 PM |
"... It's hard making a fkn fan fic that somebody will like..."
no one here will like fanfiction the only place people will like fanfiction are sites where people post fanfic most people make fun of fanfic this is the kind of fanfic begging to be made fun of |
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kidbloom
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:17 PM |
| you should know that no one seriously likes fanfiction |
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1Riblock1
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:19 PM |
Take your attitude Whence you exit, take it He gave you a place to go to be appreciated Go away |
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:20 PM |
| kidbloom just go to fanfiction.net |
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kidbloom
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1Riblock1
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:22 PM |
| Kidbloom, stop turning from a respectable person into a pathetic laughingstock in every one of your threads. |
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:25 PM |
"Some people like fan fics... All my friends like fan fics.. At least I have friends...."
your friends are losers the only people that like fanfics are hormonal 12 year old girls anyway and those aren't the kind of friends i want |
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kidbloom
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:29 PM |
| Your friends are losers too... Wait, no nvm, you have no friends irl |
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1Riblock1
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:30 PM |
Kid, you don't know him Leave the entire internet Oh, is that where all of your friends are? |
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:30 PM |
"Your friends are losers too... Wait, no nvm, you have no friends irl"
you write mcr fanfiction how can you tell me to get friends the people i hang out with anyway would laugh at you the entire internet would laugh at you
i remember when i was 12 i spent it doing better things instead of writing internet fanfiction |
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kidbloom
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Crash6351
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| 30 Jul 2013 07:41 PM |
"Use grammar, at least...."
"I HAVE NO ACTUAL COMEBACK SO I'LL JUST INSULT HIS GRAMMAR!" |
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