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| 25 Jul 2013 10:37 PM |
Its the year 3017 and life on Earth is good. All world leaders decide to combined all the continents to form the United Continents. Earth seems peaceful and for many years it seems as if nothing could go wrong. That's where your wrong my friend. December 1, 3017 is the day lives changed forever. The humans are doing what they usually do. Kids are at home learning at school from a helmet. People watch TV and local programs the usual. Everything seems fine then all around the world the cloud turn dark and nobody can see anything then a mysterious green light surrounds the Earth. The humans look for a second at the green light then mysterious creatures fall from the sky. Soon they began capturing Earthlings and putting them into mysterious ships and take the Earthlings somewhere. You wake up in a jungle like forest and look around and see others then you here something. Soon a ghost figure comes out and starts attacking you and the others. Can you survive the Planet of Death?
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0Z0NE
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| 26 Jul 2013 09:12 AM |
what is this i don't even
its basically
u wak up in forest ok
thn a skeltn popd out omg
3/4 of the Earth's population doesn't care |
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| 26 Jul 2013 09:46 AM |
| Considering the fact that any of you probably couldn't make a RP I think you should be quiet about my idea. |
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| 26 Jul 2013 09:48 AM |
Okay
sure
when my RP that i made got to 40 pages
ok sure
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tbear64
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:00 AM |
"Its the year 3017" *It's "and life on Earth is good." Of course it is until the plot kicks in. GENERIC! "All world leaders decide to combined all the continents to form the United Continents." ...Why would they even do that? It just makes it easier to invade and conquer. "Earth seems peaceful and for many years it seems as if nothing could go wrong." ...Um, since when did the United Continents exist, the mesozoic era? You have a very short-term memory, it seems. "That's where your wrong my friend." OF COURSE WE ARE! I'VE TOTALLY NEVER EVER BEEN WRONG BEFORE! Also, you're not my friend. "December 1, 3017 is the day lives changed forever." Waitwaitwait so the United Continents was formed literally the same year a really bad thing happened? You see, this is why this thread is failing. "The humans are doing what they usually do. Kids are at home learning at school from a helmet." Nothing wrong here. "People watch TV and local programs the usual." Or here. "Everything seems fine then all around the world the cloud turn dark and nobody can see anything then a mysterious green light surrounds the Earth." ...You need to make shorter sentences man. Just saying. "The humans look for a second at the green light then mysterious creatures fall from the sky." So...aliens? "Soon they began capturing Earthlings and putting them into mysterious ships and take the Earthlings somewhere." ARE THEY ALIENS? "You wake up in a jungle like forest and look around and see others then you here something." So aliens and that stuff? Okay then. So this is sci-fi? "Soon a ghost figure comes out and starts attacking you and the others." 0/10 fail creepypasta "Can you survive the Planet of Death?" How do we know the name of the planet when we just got there?
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:12 AM |
| Lol heaters are my motivation u guys think I am getting mad lol |
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:13 AM |
But, you moron
You are
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:16 AM |
| Use proper grammar please.You can't tell a person off and then use lack of grammar. LOL kid I am afraid you are the moron. |
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:21 AM |
Use proper grammar please.You In case your 2nd grade teacher didn't tell you, You are supposed to put a space after a period.
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:24 AM |
Rofl a 8 year old would rage like u.
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:29 AM |
Yeah, he would
And you clearly demonstrate it. Good job, kid.
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jbrecken
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:35 AM |
How about making a semi-original form of retaliation, Tiger.
Maybe we would see your point. |
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DDude642
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:40 AM |
> heaters are my motivation
boy thats a weird motivation
all they do is warm you up |
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| 26 Jul 2013 10:41 AM |
Tiger, you don't know a thing about proper grammar. Please, leave the smarter people alone. |
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mikey4433
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| 26 Jul 2013 12:26 PM |
This is just plain stupid
@Tiger
You say you know proper grammar when you say "Its" when it's supposed to be "It's" |
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| 26 Jul 2013 12:30 PM |
ONCE UPON A TIME I WAS ON A HYPERREALISTIC PLANET WITH HYPERREALISTIC TREES THEN A HYPERREALISTIC SKELETON WITH HYPERREALISTIC GORE OZZEING FROM HIS EYES POPPED OUT OF A HYPERREALISTIC BOX
~ Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn DESU ~ |
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