Ethan741
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:42 PM |
| And isn't the basic M16 already outdated? I'm sorry son, but what kind of wacky tobacky are you smoking today? |
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:44 PM |
INFO: I was born in Africa then when I was 11 My family moved to America and lived,their for the rest of my life. So then I moved back to Africa To live their so I could help with Africa with the war.
Name: Tim Green
Class: Shot Gunner
Place your fighting for: Africa
Squad: None
Age: 38 |
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Ethan741
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:48 PM |
| Okay, I'll stop nitpicking, and this is my last pick of nits, but isn't napalm banned by countries that accepted the Geneva Convention? |
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elfxninja
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:52 PM |
Still, I do think this is the worst war RP I've ever seen.
LET'S GIVE OUR DESIGNATED MARKSMEN REMINGTON 1740s!!! A HURR DURRR. |
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:54 PM |
| @ Elf, EHHH LETS JUDGE PEOPLE AND BE AN IDIOT Elf Shut up moron |
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elfxninja
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:56 PM |
I like judging people, if you haven't noticed. CONSTAPOOPALE |
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Ethan741
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:57 PM |
| This could be made into something amazing with a bit of effort, maybe you should do a repost... I mean, not to be "that guy" But why did you only include Germany in Europe? And what happened to the other continents? But with a little cleaning up, you could find the gold in this. |
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elfxninja
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| 06 Aug 2013 11:58 PM |
I SHALL MAKE THIS AMAZING! TO THE ELF CAVE!!! FULL OF RIPPED UP CARPET AND DIRT!! |
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| 07 Aug 2013 12:01 AM |
| I know that I didn't put EVERY place in. I would have to get them all and have 2 Squads for ALL of them. That would be annoying >.> |
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Ethan741
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| 07 Aug 2013 12:06 AM |
| But that's the thing! The more passion, hard work, and effort you put into something, the more you get out of it! You have to put SOME effort into this. You can tell when something has a lot of effort put into it, that's what makes it a good RP, along with originality of course. |
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| 07 Aug 2013 12:18 AM |
| I know the more work the more I get out of it. Every place in the world? o-o |
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Ethan741
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| 07 Aug 2013 12:20 AM |
| Just try to cover atleast all the continents. You completely forgot South America and Australia. |
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| 07 Aug 2013 02:28 AM |
| Seems simple enough! I will do is ASAP when I don't need to go. |
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| 07 Aug 2013 02:01 PM |
Final 2 Continents. South America, Australia.
Squads for South America And Australia
SQAUDS FOR : SOUTH AMERCIA. SAAT South American assault Team. CLASSES ALOUD : Shot gunner, Machine gunner, Bomber FST : Final Stance Team : CLASSES ALOUD : Sniper
SQAUDS FOR : AUSTRALIA FSAT : Final Stance Australia Team : CLASSES ALOUD : Shot gunner, Bomber. UF : United Forces : CLASSES ALOUD : Sniper, Bomber, Machine gunner. |
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AlphaX10
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| 07 Aug 2013 02:04 PM |
INFO : he's batman Name : Bruce Wayne Class : Batman Place your fighting for : BATCAVE Squad : Batman Age : 30
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| 07 Aug 2013 02:56 PM |
A M-16 is extremely outdated, having replaced with the M4A1 a bit back [and it might've been replaced against with a new M4.]. The M-16 is not even a sub machine gun, but it's a rifle. Revolvers are extremely outdated, with probably their last military usage during world war 2. They've been replaced with a pistol. Pythons are not used in any military, as far as my history lessons go. Double Barrel Shotguns are not war shotguns, they are self defense civilian shotguns, not to mention outdated. Assassins would likely carry pistols and knives, which you got that part, but they would not be a military class. They would revolve more around the CIA, which does not take part in actual battles. Bombers have napalm? Bombers usually carry mines, C4, grenades, and flash bangs, for the most part. Which would pretty much put them as a standard trooper. The only time a bomber would have napalm is if he's a specialty bomber for a certain mission. The fact that bombers don't even have guns, is a big thing. Having a sniper with a shotgun makes little sense. Shotguns are extremely unaccurate about 10 or 15 feet, and you can't aim with any precision after 50. They are CQC weapons. Snipers would carry scoped rifles, which are specialized for their jobs.
That's really it for the guns. But the fact that everyone is using US specialized weapons [for the most part] is extremely unrealistic. They all have different weapons. They may use a weapon or two of the same, but not their whole arsenal. Also, your classes are extremely skewed. For the most part, here's your classes. Medic, Sub-Machine Gunner, Rifleman, Heavy Machine Gunner, Shotgunner, and Sniper. There could be more, but for the most part, that is the bulk of armies.
Another thing I want to say, is that Germany, America, and China attacking each other is extremely unlikely. You'd have to come up with some really good reasoning for having each of them fighting each other.
One last thing, you might want to use actual squads to make it more realistic. And now I'll be generic in reccomending detail, being indepth, and more plot.
I do not say this to discourage you, but to help. Even though reading over it feels like I'm tearing apart everything. .-. |
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| 10 Aug 2013 03:17 AM |
| Assassin was overboard on my part, that is one thing im taking out. O-o |
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