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| 24 Jul 2013 08:44 PM |
Born, in the deep woods of Venezia, with his mother in pain he shoots out and finds his first sight in life, his father. When I was a little baby I was born in the woods my mother was in a lot of a pain and we had no medicine no food, no clothing, nothing. All we had to cover me was a scarf. Born, on the 19th of October we were poor, living in the deep far woods on the edge of Venezia. I remember as a new born my mother's eyes were turning red and black. When I was three months old, my mother died. Me and my father struggled finding food. Than a FEAR soldier named Colonel Fire found us and raised my father to fight while Officer Echo took care of me.
When, I was three I started learned how to "Sword Fight" I was very bad until I reached the age of nine when I started to get better. My father was in most of the divisions I saw him die in the battle of FEAR and VAK. He died has a respected Colonel. I never thought he would die in such a bloody battle. He killed so many men in each and every war he fought in. I was twelve when he died. I joined FEAR School until I nineteen I got release with a promotion in the main division. There I worked my way up, traveling to all the plants in the system to learn and teach. When, I reached twenty- three I saw the most prettiest girl of my dreams soon, we had a child, his name is "Solar" I learned as much as I could and handle the hardest job of life, being a father.
My wife, Solar and I went all over the system. I soon made it into the Replica Forces and I was called up for a lot of missions, battles and everything else to prepare for the war against TRA. I sent my family to Lympha while I guarded Venezia and fought in the TRA's base. But, while defending I received a note saying I have been demotion and to leave the planet. I moved with my family where I fought for EL. I hated it I was a Shock Trooper for four loyal years with them.
I finally decided I was going back to Venezia with my son Solar and my wife. Solar was now turning seven and I decided once more to leave him in FEAR School then to pick him up at night. I worked almost all- day and then ad to go back to work I came all the way back to the rank I got demotion too, which was Major. But, FEAR School was shutdown and at the age of ten I started teaching Solar how to Sword Fight now, Solar was voted "Best Sword Fighter in FEAR Academy" and I couldn't be any proud to be his father. Now, I serve my flesh and blood to FEAR til the day I die.
Now, Solar, my wife and I live in a beautiful house, amazing education, and good jobs, we.... are very blessed.....
Never give up, stand out. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 08:48 PM |
| Cool story. Talented author here. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 08:51 PM |
| Nice job, you're a talented author. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 08:51 PM |
ur cool
Hail Arcadia, Glory to the Imperium, Honor to the Emperor! |
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| 24 Jul 2013 08:52 PM |
| Thanks ya'll I just thought it would be cool to make a story like this. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 09:06 PM |
| Nice! I call some sort of warrior role. <3 |
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| 24 Jul 2013 09:08 PM |
| I would post my story. But unfortunately It is way to long. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 10:32 PM |
| Amen to the last part HAIL VENEZIA! |
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| 24 Jul 2013 10:37 PM |
Good story. But I saw a flaw. According to FEAR lore, you don't just 'join' the replica forces. They're like clones or something. I may be wrong so correct me if I am, but I noticed that. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 10:50 PM |
| Well I didn't want to make it really long. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 10:52 PM |
comma splices
comma splices everywhere |
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| 29 Jul 2013 10:43 AM |
| FEAR and VAK never battled just in case you didnt know steady thats what Iroc told me. |
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