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| 24 Jul 2013 05:38 AM |
because
idk what else 2 d0!! -----------------------------------
FADE IN:
EXT. FOREST CLEARING, NIGHT
Two cloaked figures are standing in the mist covered clearing of a forest. One of them raises their hand and a fire appears in front of them.
FIGURE 1 May they live forever.
FIGURE 2 Long live the forgotten Gods.
FIGURE 1 The rightful Gods.
FIGURE 2 May they live forever.
The fire clears away to reveal a massive cavernous hole. The two figures walk closer to it and remove blades from their cloaks. They slice their hands and watch as their blood falls into the hole.
FIGURE 1 Rise up.
FIGURE 2 Lead the darkness.
FIGURE 1 Cover this world of light and creation. Bring back the dark.
FIGURE 2 Take back what was once your's.
Thick fumes of black smoke emit from the hole. It rises up into the sky and begins to spread across.
BEGIN END CREDITS: ---------------------------------------
I know this is cheesy and predictable, but that's the point. It's supposed to be a reference to The Gate, what was once one of my favorite movies when I was little. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 05:43 AM |
| Woot thats more like it, yes it was cheesy in some points but I think you did good. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 05:52 AM |
Cliché,
Cheesy,
Predictable.
Get out. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 05:57 AM |
@fang/swift/whateverimsupposedtocallyou
*you're just saying that*
@ultra
I'M GONNA' RIP YOUR HEAD OFF AND BOWL WITH IT
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xgfWMd0jlOg |
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| 24 Jul 2013 06:02 AM |
Alright I don't know what to say man, try writing longer make it just come to you.
Oh and btw don't think of it as a script think of it like a story. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 06:07 AM |
| So what are we looking at here? Some Pagan cult? |
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| 24 Jul 2013 06:10 AM |
"Thick fumes of black smoke emit from the hole. It rises up into the sky and begins to spread across."
The cloaked figures were members of a cult that worshipped The Seven Princes of Hell. They succeeded in releasing one of the princes from their imprisonment.
Leslie has unknowingly created a prequel to my SPN trilogy. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 06:14 AM |
if you want, ultra
if you want
but if we go with my original plan -
These are worshippers of The Gate, an interdimensional tunnel to what is now Hell.
The creatures trapped in Hell are basically Lovecraftian demons that once ruled the universe before light and creation was around. They lived in the dark. They traveled across the cosmos, and ate entire species for lunch.
2badtheydied. |
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| 24 Jul 2013 06:20 AM |
I don't know, man, I personally feel my interpretation of the story has more salt, but hey you wrote it.
You wrote pure evil incarnate.
How do you feel? |
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| 24 Jul 2013 06:23 AM |
| I FEEL LIKE I AM ABOUT TO OPEN THE GATE AND BRING BACK THE FORGOTTEN GODS! |
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| 24 Jul 2013 06:32 AM |
fang/swift
i didnt even see your second post
im sry
so sry
and i agree with you on the longer story part
but i have to write script formats, because, well,
i'm gonna be doing it for a career one day so i might as well |
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| 24 Jul 2013 07:52 AM |
| Well do what you like, as long as you like it. =) |
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