bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 04:18 PM |
Patient 83 was a young girl when it happened.
It was June 17, and ‘83’, real name Antabella, was writing on her wall as usual.
Sentences that were not her own soon came from her dull pencil, and lines made a map-like image on her wall.
The force controlling her hand called itself Nina, who said that Antabella was her other self.
Nina soon revealed that her drawing was indeed a way out of Medical Ward 7, where their shared body had been trapped for over a month now.
‘Let me have a bit of control,’ Nina would say. ‘This will make us stronger, and soon we can both be free.’
Only a week later, Antabella had taken Nina’s deal.
Not long after that, a realization came to Patient 83.
Nina had her own goal in mind, and was using her as a pawn to reach it.
Too late.
The escape was quick and violent.
Antabella could only watch as Nina murdered one person after another, unable to stop her.
Upon freedom, Nina’s mind was in complete control.
Ex-Patient 83’s will became too strong for even Nina to bear after a time.
The young girl used a distraction to separate herself and Nina before running away.
One problem.
All that Antabella could remember was her life in Medical Ward 7 and a rather subtle fact:
Nina had to be stopped.
Now, I have a question for you.
Will you help Antabella save her world, or will you help Nina take over it?
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CS:
Name:
Nickname:
Age:
Gender:
Species:
Appearance:
Bio:
Good or Evil?:
Powers: (Optional)
Extra: (Optional)
Love Interest?: (Optional)
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~Rules~
No godmodding!
Not any major romance, hugging and kishing I allow
Try to use grammar. I don’t want any “trolol blah blah 2 be blah” kind of stuff.
No Gary-Stues/Mary-Stues please
Normal ROBLOX rules also apply!
Have fun and enjoy!
If you read the rules, put Bean is derpy somewhere in the post!
(Please don't troll me...this is my first attempt in creating a roleplay) |
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jackson61
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| 20 Jul 2013 04:19 PM |
| ( Good for a first RP, you have the basic structure. Although, I admit that you could have a done a bit better at the plot. Not everyone knows who those characters are. ) |
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 04:54 PM |
| (Thanks. I will take that into mind =D) |
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jackson61
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 05:19 PM |
(Name: Nathan Lindwood McDowell
Nickname: Nate, Sparky
Age: 14
Gender: Dude (Deeerp.)
Species: Fox
Appearance: Tall, black-furred, yellow-eyed, shaggy black / yellow hair, covered in scars
Bio: Last member of a culture called the Gwynedd, who were victims of mass genocide in a war. Orphan, grew up popular until 12, which was when the genocide took place. Met Bean at age 13, same with Nina.
Good or Evil?: You'll see =)
Powers: Control over lightning, Light Speed (ability to use light to travel long distances)
Extra: Uses a jagged black sword called Iomduin and a combat knife
Love Interest?: Nina) |
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 05:30 PM |
| (Does he have clothes? Whats his exact height? and read the rules) |
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| 20 Jul 2013 05:33 PM |
| ((Oh hi. Can I just ask what species the two characters in the original post are so I can decide my character better? After all, we don't want a dog working for a cat, do we?)) |
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| 20 Jul 2013 05:36 PM |
(Fine. Revised.
Name: Nathan Linwood McDowell
Nickname: Nate, Sparky
Age: 14
Gender: Dude (Deeerp.)
Species: Fox
Appearance: Tall, black-furred, yellow-eyed, shaggy and kinda long black / yellow hair, covered in scars. Usually wears torn black jeans, black and lightning bolt shirt, semi-torn black jacket, black gold-buckle boots.
Bio: Last member of a culture called the Gwynedd, who were victims of mass genocide in a war. Orphan, grew up popular until 12, which was when the genocide took place. Met Bean at age 13, same with Nina.
Good or Evil?: You'll see
Powers: Control over lightning
Extra: Uses a jagged black sword called Ioduin and a combat knife
Love Interest?: Nina)
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 05:38 PM |
| (And that's racist against foxes and echidnas xD) |
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:15 PM |
(Alright. Scanning through the possible ideas I have... oh hey this one sounds good.)
Name: Specc Nickname: No Nicknames. Age: Effectively ageless. He forgot how old he was, too. Gender: Male Species: He's apparently some kind of... ghost? Oh boy, I'll have a heck of a time trying to make him not OP. Appearance: When he isn't solid, he's something along the lines of a bunch of floating, dark violet bubbles that are a centimeter in diameter each.
When he is solidish, however, his head and arms are a medium shade of purple. His irises are Magenta, and the little 'hair hair' he has curls backwards behind the side of his ears from the top of his head. His chest and torso area is completely black, and where his legs would be is a simple, dark violet ghostly tail. Measuring out the parts of him that actually exist makes him about 60 centimeters, and he's about as tall as Sonic(note: measurement example, Sonic may or may not exist) else when you factor how much he floats off the ground.
He doesn't wear any clothes unless asked to, by the way. He has a plain dark green t-shirt that he can wear.
Bio: Specc... Honestly, no one really knows Specc that well, not even him.("Death does that to you," he says.) He apparently died 'a really long time ago,' but his soul seems to have been able to work completely fine without a physical body, and developed a semiphysical body anyways. One of the very few things he remembers about when he was alive is that "Beans are too derpy," but he doesn't know what that even means. Good or Evil?: He's probably somewhere between 'Neutral' and 'Evil'. He isn't all-out Evil, but he is quite chaotic sometimes.
Powers: He can turn into a form that isn't solid and can pass through objects, but is still visible. He normally feels as solid as a tree, but is less than that if a force slowly pushes on him. Think something like that one mix of water and corn starch that always seems to happen in science class. Extra: Dislikes light and carries a ghostly 'shademaker'(Note: It's a parasol but he refuses to call it that) for protection from it. It can be a part of his arm if he wants it to be. Love Interest?: "Why bother with love if you're dead?!" (AKA none) |
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:23 PM |
| (Accepted. and Nathan...read the rules...again.) |
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bean5011
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:36 PM |
| (*Now. Sorry, also making CSes) |
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Quasar99
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:39 PM |
Name: TAIRO-922
Nickname: Tarot, Taro
Age: He's just an old prototype of a robot. He has no age.
Gender: He's a sandstone mechanism. No gender, silly. Though he likes to think he is a male, and probably is.
Species: He's technically a robot made of sandstone. Think of that one huge sandstone robot boss from SAB2 but much smaller.
Appearance: TAIRO-922 is a sandstone robot, in a shape that looks like a small jar with a head. His head is covered with a chiseled-in spartan helmet and the mechanism in his eyes make them shine a bright cyan-light blue color. His chest is mostly broken up, and he stands at a relatively tall 6'2. He weights almost 1000 pounds, being made entirely out of machines, plating, chainmail, and sandstone. His legs are as efficient as any others. He can run pretty fast, but nowhere near as fast as Sonic the Hedgehog. Part of his right arm is burnt and scorched, and his index finger is broken off from his left.
Bio: TAIRO-922 was made in a small, secret facility by 3 foxes and some other unidentifiable beings. They looked rather nice, and they made 60 prototypes and robots before TAIRO-922 escaped. The most notable of which are GADOLIN-197, SLERR-514 and TAIRO-922. Even though having only one emotion, hate, he felt sympathy for some of the other robots and attempted a robotic coup to break out. It was successful, though most robots were destroyed and left to decompose and become ruins. TAIRO-922 was lucky he managed to get out.
Good or Evil?: Neutral.
Powers: Tarot can float and fly, if that counts as a power. He also has a small sword.
Extra: Bean is derpy.
Love Interest?: He's a robot, silly. |
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:42 PM |
| (I suppose Kohl couldn't be part of this, Bean?) |
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bean5011
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:45 PM |
Name: Antabella Markov
Nickname: Bean, sometimes calls herself Katrina
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Species: Hedgehog
Appearance: Long brown hair that reaches her waist, and her hair covers her left eye. Her right eye is a dark blue and her left eye is a dull grey (Will explain later). She normally wears a green hat (Sorta looks like Link's from LoZ) and wears a green shirt, blue jeans, and brown boots. She has a brown belt that goes slightly at an angle. She has a scar that goes across the top left part of her forehead all the way down to her left cheek, which isn't normally visible due to her hair. (At the moment though, she wears a patient's wear)
Bio: (Most of it will be revealed as the roleplay goes along, but I'll do her for now bio) After being in the Asylum for a year, everyone thought she was dead. Soon, when Nina came to her and offered her an escape. She eventually said yes, and then Nina took over, she realized she was tricked. She is tramatized by the murders she saw and when she split from Nina, she ran off into the woods, terrified of being caught and Nina taking over.
Good or Evil?: Good
Powers: (Optional) Unknowingly, she has fire powers.
Extra: (Optional) She uses a sword to fight mostly, as her fire powers can only be used around fire and lava.
Love Interest?: (Optional) To be revealed...
Name: Nina Senka
Nickname: Sometimes called Solar Flare and Flare, but not often.
Age: Appears 15
Gender: Female
Species: Demonic hedgehog
Appearance: Black curly hair that reaches her shoulders, and bangs that spike that are red. She has bright red eyes. She has black fur. She has a red beret on her head. She wears a red V-neck shirt with a black vest over it. She wears black jeans and has red sneakers. She wears black spiked bracelets.
Bio: She was trapped inside Antabella for a month, after tricking her and escaping the Asylum, she planned to take over the world and to rid Antabella for good. She was inside Antabella ever since she was born, now that she has her own body, she wants to get revenge for all the years she was trapped.
Good or Evil?: Evil
Powers: (Optional) Fire and Darkness
Extra: (Optional) Fights with a blood red sword, and has more use of her powers than Antabella
Love Interest?: (Optional) A dog named Rudolph (If the guy who owns him joins)
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:52 PM |
(Edit to mine. Love Interest?: None. (Forever alone :'c)) |
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| 20 Jul 2013 06:52 PM |
(@Quasar: You mean the Egg Golem? 8l
Anyways, how long until we start?) |
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