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| 10 Jun 2013 10:59 AM |
2189. It's been 95 years since interstellar travel has been created. It's been 80 years since colonies and governments have been established on the Moon, Mars, AGE-6(Andromeda Galaxy Exoplanet 6), and CTE-1(Canter Taureas Exoplanet One). It's been 30 years since the terrorists known as the Centurions have badly damaged Earth, and almost all of the population was killed or fled to the colonies, making more constructed and protected colonies. But with more military protection, you need soldiers. Plot: Floating high above the planet it got its name from, Jupiter Academy is a large spaceship/station where students ages 18-25 train to become the elite Jupiter Super Soldiers in the colonies, or protecting Earth. There is a virtual reality battlefield, learning classes, tactical strategy hands on experiences, free time in the Lounge Deck, and a training course in Jupiter itself to train in CTE-1's dangerous Unknown Territory. Good luck, and try and make it through the Academy.
You can have one or two characters. Standard rules apply.
Name: Age: Gender: Appearance: Planet training for: Items: Main weapon: Secondary: Extra: Bio:
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kugoha
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| Joined: 03 Jun 2013 |
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| 10 Jun 2013 11:15 AM |
Name: Jake Age:29 Gender:Male Appearance:School uniform. (if its has one) if not red jacket, white tank, brown hair, sunglasses, open skin and 1.80 hieght Planet training for: Earth Items:Knife, lightstick,Binoculars, Outer-space type compass, Main weapon: Sniper-double desert eagle (some situaitions) Secondary:desert Eagle Extra:poisend skin (Can't be tuched) Bio: A teenage sent to the space vacum that the terrorists used on earth 28 years ago, After floting in space for 5 days ended up in Academy, Now training to find his parents on Earth.
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| 10 Jun 2013 12:00 PM |
| (Well, poisoned skin isn't that... realistic, or floating in space... other than that, accepted.) |
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jabir1234
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| 11 Jun 2013 08:29 AM |
| (But I thought it was good) |
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Quilbour
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| Joined: 08 Jan 2013 |
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| 11 Jun 2013 08:34 AM |
| [It isn't good. It sucks.] |
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| 11 Jun 2013 08:39 AM |
((I like it, may join soon.))
So how was your day? |
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at900
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| 12 Jun 2013 10:44 AM |
Name: Conner Blade Age: 19 Gender: Female Appearance: She is tan and skinny, she has light blond hair and bright blue eyes, she wears (if there is on uniform) black skinny jeans, a white tank top, an old army jacket, and bright blue converse Planet training for: Earth Items: all she keeps with her is a picture of her parents, her cloths, and school stuff Main weapon: AK-47 Secondary: 20 caliber hand gun Extra:N/A Bio: Conner was the 4th child in her family, so that meant she was the one to be left behind, she was 3 when a kind family took her in, then when she was 14 she ran away, she lived on the streets, recently she found a nice job and a little apartment (that she will leave if she get in to the school) her life is better now, the only thing to remind her of her family is her jacket, it was her grate, grate, grate, grate grandfathers that has been passed down for generations. |
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| 12 Jun 2013 01:02 PM |
| (Accepted, the bottom one. Top, lol no.) |
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| 14 Jun 2013 12:54 PM |
(thx)
Conner walks on to a flying car to go to her first day of school |
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| 14 Jun 2013 01:59 PM |
Name: Lucas Woods Age: 21 Gender: M Appearance: Tall, blond hair, brown eyes, Jupiter Academy uniform, backpack Planet training for: CTE-1 Items: Backpack filled with hologram phone, tablet computer, notepad and pencil, and a ballcap. Main weapon: Jupiter Rifle (Standard rifle) Secondary: TE7 Security Pistol Extra: N/A Bio: He volunteered to come to Jupiter Academy instead of being forced to go. |
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| 14 Jun 2013 02:00 PM |
Lucas I walked down to the transport station. It was time for my first class, Observation of CTE-1. |
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Techmagss
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| 14 Jun 2013 02:43 PM |
| This had some real potential-it was wasted try harder next time 3/10 |
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| 14 Jun 2013 04:56 PM |
| (How was it wasted? I think it was wasted because of lagging on the story, no good character interaction, or any dynamic characters made. What about you?) |
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| 14 Jun 2013 04:58 PM |
| ( I am so sorry. Wrong thread. Haha. What was wrong with it? I think maybe not a complex story.) |
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Techmagss
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| Joined: 24 Jun 2009 |
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| 14 Jun 2013 05:02 PM |
| Eh, a few of us old'friends' had an idea like this a few months ago, which is why I thought it had potential, but now that I read it closely it seems... Stupid, to be honest. Anyway, characters are crappy and the standard 'SPAAACE KATNISSSS' dealio and they're bland and uninteresting. The op refrained from explaining further into anything, either. It seemed rushed and wasted. |
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| 14 Jun 2013 05:12 PM |
| It was rushed. I had the idea in my head but I had to leave so I typed it fast. |
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| 14 Jun 2013 10:43 PM |
| Conner steps out of the car and looks around at every thing, its vary big to her, she starts to walk to the main building |
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| 15 Jun 2013 05:35 PM |
Lucas As I'm on the tunnel pod, the guard making his way to the security office nods to me. I give a two fingered salute and look through the window. |
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| 15 Jun 2013 05:38 PM |
| Conner walks into her first class and sets her iPad down on her desk then scrolls to find the online book she needs |
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| 15 Jun 2013 05:42 PM |
Lucas
I walk up to the steps of the main building. Looking up at the glass ceiling, I see one of Jupiter's moons. Honestly, I don't know half of the moon names in Jupiter, even though it's a common core standard. Chuckling, I walk to class. |
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