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| 15 Jul 2013 07:29 PM |
In the future, everyone has a mind scanner implanted in their brains at birth. The instant someone dies, their brain is scanned and their mind is uploaded to a Virtual World. If you want to visit a dead relative, all you have to do is go online. But the scanner malfunctions, and the dead people rise as themselves, but have a sort of code surrounding them.
How's that? ^ |
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| 15 Jul 2013 07:39 PM |
| i think its cool but you might just need some more info and be more detailed :) |
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| 15 Jul 2013 07:44 PM |
I was just going for a basic idea. We can collab for more detail later, but *do* you want to collab? Or anyone else? |
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| 15 Jul 2013 07:46 PM |
| sure, i think the idea is a good one, it just needs a little bit more or people will reject you :/ |
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| 15 Jul 2013 07:47 PM |
Way to give it to me straight lol. Anyone else? |
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| 15 Jul 2013 07:47 PM |
This is an amazing idea But you need a conflict Besides that, it's really good! |
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| 15 Jul 2013 07:49 PM |
Yay! Anyone else? (Sending piratepad link right now) |
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| 15 Jul 2013 07:59 PM |
i'll help im bored anyway and i have a writer's block i need to kick in the face so lets go
"Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!" |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:04 PM |
*kick* Giving you the link now.. |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:09 PM |
| Don't leave, cag, I was just on roblox sending the link to Quas |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:15 PM |
| And how would you improve it, Bebi? |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:16 PM |
| Going to the past and killing the OP's parents. |
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jackson61
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:17 PM |
Bebi. That was a tiny bit too far off the edge. Even for you.
:ban floodcheck |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:25 PM |
"What a killjoy."
Finally, someone agrees.
Or at least, someone willingly admits it. |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:28 PM |
| I so bored so I'm randomly posting I would even play a game without anything on the base cuz im that bored |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:43 PM |
Hm? Does that mean you want to join the collab? |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:45 PM |
| Yeah It will help me not Die of boredom |
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| 15 Jul 2013 08:54 PM |
Alright, sending you the link. Everyone left the piratepad, so anyone else bored enough to help? |
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