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fizzyrainbowbubbles is not online. fizzyrainbowbubbles
Joined: 26 Nov 2012
Total Posts: 60
14 Jul 2013 04:52 PM
How can your eyes be so enticing
When you walk by
Your smile catches every girl in the street
I wonder why

But you choose me
The lonely
A girl to get her hopes up
So when I looked up
My fire lit up
To see an angel at my door

I though you were an angel
To save me
To save me from my loneliness
But when you knew I fell for you
You grew a tail
Some horns
To reveal the devil
Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh...

How was I such a foolish target
To raise your bow
I thought you had white feathery wings
And a pure golden halo

But I loved you
That I'd do
Anything for you
But from the sweet start
We should've been apart
Before you broke my heart

I though you were an angel
To save me
To save me from my loneliness
But when you knew I fell for you
You grew a tail
Some horns
To reveal the devil
Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh...

Why oh why did I fall for you
And your angelic looks
But you crushed me
Broke me
And left me shattered on the ground
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I thought you were an angel
To save me
Top save me from my loneliness
But when you knew I fell for you
You grew a tail
Some horns
To reveal the devil

Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh...

The Devil

Oh...oh oh...ohh oh oh...oh...

The Devil

Marks out of 10?
This is my second song btw >.< cx
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lazydyke is not online. lazydyke
Joined: 12 Jul 2013
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14 Jul 2013 04:56 PM
3/10
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fizzyrainbowbubbles is not online. fizzyrainbowbubbles
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14 Jul 2013 05:00 PM
I guess I'm not really cut out for song writing but I wanna keep on trying...
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robthehobo3 is not online. robthehobo3
Joined: 22 Jun 2013
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14 Jul 2013 07:25 PM
By the name of Jesus Christ, I comandeth you to leave MT.
Begone demon.
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Yalx is not online. Yalx
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14 Jul 2013 07:27 PM
... Why did you write a whole song.
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fizzyrainbowbubbles is not online. fizzyrainbowbubbles
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15 Jul 2013 12:38 AM
robthehobo - That's just plain mean

Yalx - I wanted to write a full song so I can try and write music to it
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PlutonianShore is not online. PlutonianShore
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15 Jul 2013 12:40 AM
This is truly abismal, no, seriously, this is lacking in every sense of the word and you should feel ashamed of writing such rubbish.
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
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15 Jul 2013 12:44 AM
0/10 wouldn't read again.
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LouisThomas11 is not online. LouisThomas11
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15 Jul 2013 12:45 AM
0/10

why
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fizzyrainbowbubbles is not online. fizzyrainbowbubbles
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15 Jul 2013 01:03 AM
D':
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JohnnyBravo is not online. JohnnyBravo
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15 Jul 2013 01:37 AM
People are being a little too harsh. I kind of liked it.

6/10.
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larus3 is not online. larus3
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15 Jul 2013 01:45 AM
Don't let your critics be too harsh.
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PlutonianShore is not online. PlutonianShore
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15 Jul 2013 01:53 AM
It's our opinion. She can't or can let us be harsh. Goof'd up, mang.


It doesn't change the fact this is just terrifyingly horrendous.
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robthehobo3 is not online. robthehobo3
Joined: 22 Jun 2013
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15 Jul 2013 09:27 AM
"robthehobo - That's just plain mean"

Hey, don't blame me, your the one who mentioned the devil.
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RulerOfHeaven is not online. RulerOfHeaven
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15 Jul 2013 09:27 AM
is bad

0/10 would not recommend
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roblox22478 is not online. roblox22478
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15 Jul 2013 09:28 AM
OP is obviously ODer.
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robthehobo3 is not online. robthehobo3
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15 Jul 2013 09:30 AM
Yep.
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roblox22478 is not online. roblox22478
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15 Jul 2013 09:32 AM
0/10

My mind is corrupted since I read this.
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buck10me is not online. buck10me
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15 Jul 2013 10:00 AM
Your mind?

My Flashdrive is corrupted now!

- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7AnhjdmrUmU -
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fizzyrainbowbubbles is not online. fizzyrainbowbubbles
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15 Jul 2013 11:09 AM
To people who are being really kind...thanks !!!!
If you do think it's bad then put it less harsh and maybe say what's bad about the song the cx
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roblox22478 is not online. roblox22478
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15 Jul 2013 11:14 AM
Gtfo fizzy.
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fizzyrainbowbubbles is not online. fizzyrainbowbubbles
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15 Jul 2013 11:33 AM
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Duncanbishop is not online. Duncanbishop
Joined: 20 May 2008
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15 Jul 2013 01:41 PM
Aren't you people being a bit rude? Not every song is the greatest thing in the world, and to be honest, this is better than some modern songs... 7/10.
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Crash6351 is not online. Crash6351
Joined: 17 Oct 2008
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15 Jul 2013 03:46 PM
"Aren't you people being a bit rude? Not every song is the greatest thing in the world, and to be honest, this is better than some modern songs... 7/10."

Criticism is the most evillll thing in the world!
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Duncanbishop is not online. Duncanbishop
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15 Jul 2013 04:00 PM
"Criticism is the most evillll thing in the world!"
_______________________________________

That's why there's this thing called "Constructive Criticism", you say what could be done to improve, and not that they need to leave, or just calling it bad.
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