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| 06 Jul 2013 11:43 AM |
As are world was peaceful and come a zombie outbreak has taken over the world bitting their target and turning them in flesh eat mutant.A group of survivor have barriacade themselves in the city of robloxia trying to think of a way to survive.
Stephen-We need find a tunnel I saw one earlier when we go here we can't survive here much lonnger with low supplies!,what are going to do ?
Megan-We can uh kill some animals and feed them to the zombie for distraction ?
Michael-That's not gonna work these zombie finish their food in a minute and that gonna take for ever,wait I said a minute ?! yeah in a minute if give them food and drive off they won't be able to catch us,so can we do this ?.
Ryan-Good Idea rally all the animals you can find because the nightmare just begun.
As the four group of teens rally all the animals they can find something will happen.
Ryan-Hhhhheeeeelp !
Megan-Oh my .......
A zombie with a long tounge was able to move it through fence and grab ryan.
Michael-What do we do ?
Stephen-YOU DO THIS HHHHIIIIYAAAA !!!!!!!!!!
Cutting of the tounge ryan was broken free .
Ryan,Megan,Michael-How did you ?
Stephan-Left 4 Dead and Left 4 Dead 2 remember ?
Ryan.Megan,Michael-Oh yeah
The group were able to feed the zombie drove off but the zombie were catching up.
Stephan-Ryan drive faster !
Ryan-I'm trying,I'm trying ,Michael how the hot wiring for speed ?
Michael-Almost there , NOW !
Ryan pushed the gas pedal as the drove off moving away from zombies the group celeberate in their victory.
Ryan-We should ???
(Gun Shot)
Michael-Who that ?
Megan-Stick your dang head out then ?
Stephan-Shhhhh......
Megan-It's him !
Stephan,Ryan-Michael-Him !
Megan-Shhhhh....
???-Come and play megan !
Megan-Leave us al....
Megan is shot in the eye and dies infront of the four boys Ryan,Stephan,michael took out their meele weapons.
???-You son of !
The group attacks the mysterious man.
Stephan-That's her Exs he was mentally insane after she dumped him
Michael-We should burried the body ?
Stephan,Ryan-Yeah !
The buried the body of Megan and also decided to buried body of Megan mysterious Ex they leave the camp look from some other survivors the next day.
The End of Episode One |
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frazpeep
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| 06 Jul 2013 12:21 PM |
| BAd grammar mistakes, alot in there. |
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| 06 Jul 2013 12:47 PM |
| You dont put a space when you end a sentence in . ? or ! |
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jackson61
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| 06 Jul 2013 12:50 PM |
There's effort in there.
Somewhere over the rainbow... |
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| 06 Jul 2013 12:57 PM |
| Is it ok if I try to rewrite this to improve the plotline and correct grammar errors? |
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elfxninja
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| 06 Jul 2013 11:36 PM |
| That illiegal You can't rewrite it without my premission if you I shall report you . |
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elfxninja
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| 06 Jul 2013 11:59 PM |
| Did you put a copyright on this story? No. Did you trademark this story? No. |
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Ozawa
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| 07 Jul 2013 03:13 AM |
Someone, cover my eyes. I can't handle this much stupidity. |
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| 07 Jul 2013 04:42 AM |
| Shut Up my Keyboard is a little messed up. |
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| 07 Jul 2013 07:52 AM |
| Sorry mate but if your keyboard is that messed up I'd not like to see it when it's not. |
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