kiki1811
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| 06 Jul 2013 06:28 PM |
Chapter 1: ___________
It was the first snowfall of the year. The clouds scattered the sky, obscuring the evening light of the sun. Everyone would be inside, sheltering from the cold. But that wasn't the case for my brothers and sisters and I. My name is Callus. I was born into a country that had seen many years of war, many years of hatred. When my parents were born, the Government had set laws in place that dictated every single section of everyone's life. As soon as you were born, people called the Choosers would decide your life. Your parents were not allowed to name you, they had to accept the name from the Choosers. They chose which school you would go to, what to wear, and whether your parents even gets to keep you. Once you turned 18, you were required by law to move out and go to the college that had been chosen for you. They would give you a new I.D, complete with a new name, then give you a contract that you had to sign, or else you would either be thrown into jail, where you would be tortured to death, or executed. Once you signed the contract, they would give you a paper that showed how many kids you could have and what gender they would have to be, where you would be staying for the rest of your life (or until they chose to move you), and what job you would take. If you decided to have kids and they weren't the gender intended, or you had twins when you were only aloud to have one child, you were told to kill it or give it to the government where they would kill it or raise it to be a slave. If you didn't do either of those, they would come to your home and rip the baby from your home, taking it away. There were even cameras everywhere, except your house. They were on the lights, in your car, even pointing at the front door of every house. You had no privacy. But there were still people who had more kids then the law aloud, different genders. You're reading the words of one right now. |
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vladski
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| 06 Jul 2013 06:44 PM |
no offense but does anyone read these
but can it run crysis at max settings |
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kiki1811
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| 06 Jul 2013 08:04 PM |
| ~vladski I know a few people do. Look at the views :P |
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vladski
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| 06 Jul 2013 08:07 PM |
F5.
but can it run crysis at max settings |
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kiki1811
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| 06 Jul 2013 08:10 PM |
| And mostly I put these on here so my best friends can read them. |
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vladski
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| 06 Jul 2013 08:14 PM |
so ur besties cann reed dem XD
but can it run crysis at max settings |
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kiki1811
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| 06 Jul 2013 08:30 PM |
Yes, and no offense but the grammatical errors in that last statement are too dang high.
“All that is gold does not glitter, Not all those who wander are lost; The old that is strong does not wither, Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken, A light from the shadows shall spring; Renewed shall be blade that was broken, The crownless again shall be king.” |
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| 06 Jul 2013 08:32 PM |
| No one wants to read a huge wall of words with no paragraphs |
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kiki1811
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| 06 Jul 2013 08:41 PM |
~Super
1) That's your opinion 2) Paragraphs won't work, the spacing gets deleted.
And as for no one wanting to read it, my friends want to read it and that's all that matters to me. |
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| 06 Jul 2013 09:54 PM |
| it's called the enter button |
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| 06 Jul 2013 10:56 PM |
Hey guys she just wants to write, leave her do it.
It's more creative then giving critics. |
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