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| 03 Jul 2013 09:50 PM |
Chapter 1; Interrogation ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I woke up in a dark room, something told me it was day. But the pitch black walls of this boxed room told me other wise. "Hey, he's away!" Yelled a mysterious figure. As my eye site started to clear I noticed he was dressed in a dark black. His face was covered with a mask resembling the same color . "We have some questions, and if you don't wish to cooperate..." He jerked his head in the direction of two hammers, parallel. Hammers that any noob would know as "Ban Hammers."
"No, this isn't happening" I frantically told myself as I tried to escape the chains bonding me to a small chair. The bright light from above faintly shined down on the figures head. "So tell me about that shirt you made." He said sternly. "A shirt, what? Is this a joke?" I sarcastically blurted out. "You know exactly what I'm talking about!" He yelled slapping me along the cheek. "And how about you're partner?" As soon as he finished the phase, an old buddy of mines CLASSYDEREK545, was shoved into the room by two guards, each wore a white Dominus, and black cloths. "Jay, help me!" He screamed as the two guards put him into the banning machine and started it up.
"Okay! I scammed the people, just don't lets CLASSY die!" The interrogator gave a sly grin, as he ordered the guards to put an end to the ROBLOXIANS life. "No, turn it off!" I screamed in panic, but it was to late. CLASSY was gone, vanished as the duel hammers hit him in the sides. I began sobbing, hating myself for everything I had done to lead to this. "I think we broke you." The man chuckled. "Knock him out." The two guards lumbered to me, and the larger one smacked me in the head. For all I know, this was only the beginning of my troubles." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Over time I'll be adding famous, and normal ROBLOXIANS. If you wish to be put in this, just post it. |
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| 03 Jul 2013 09:56 PM |
| I want to be in the story! :) |
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Quasar99
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| 03 Jul 2013 10:00 PM |
Great story. :> May I be in it?
╩○Zyklon○╩ |
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| 03 Jul 2013 10:02 PM |
| I'll fit in as many people as I can. (It'd be great if you could pm me why you want to be in ban land in the first place.) |
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| 03 Jul 2013 10:08 PM |
Eh. I like to be spot. I like to be in book. story*.
-Blaik. |
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| 03 Jul 2013 10:18 PM |
I will I was in banland due to some noobs tricking me to break a rule I will be found in the deepest depths in banland, with a katana and gun. |
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Red678
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Quilboar
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| 04 Jul 2013 11:29 AM |
Nineteen Eighty ROBLOX
if i could be in it that'd be relatively cool |
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| 04 Jul 2013 11:50 AM |
| I would like to be in this. |
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| 04 Jul 2013 12:02 PM |
| Okay, I have a good amount of people for the moment. Any post past here (Until I say) May not get in. :\ |
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| 04 Jul 2013 12:26 PM |
Chapter 2; Trial ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Later the night of the interrogation, I was blinded by a white sack, and removed from the room sobbing. CLASSY, had just been punished with the hammer of Thor. Or worst, the hammer of ROBLOX. For the next couple of nights I was kept in an enclosed cell, no light of the day was visible. I was put in a position ROBLOXIANS told there kids about at bed time. A tale to keep them in strait, a tale about Ban Land.
It was then, the next step to the rest of my miserable life rushed into reality. Three of the guards, dressed in the same white Dominus as the last night stormed into my grey, loamy, cell. Without a word they grappled me, cuffed me, blinded me, and carried me off.
For about an hour, I could tell that they shoved me into a van, and drove off to who know's where. With me completely clueless. To clueless. "What did they teach me in class, about ban land." I muttered to myself. "They start with the interrogation, they break you, then they put you on trial, then it's off to banland. No one knows much more." I recalled desperately. Suddenly the drivers stomped the break, as I jerked half a foot forward. "Here we are." He called to his companions. As the back doors of the rather large van opened, I could tell it was about noon as little bits of light sneaked through the cracks in what once may have been a potato sack. "So you're a scammer, hu?" He asked. "Um, yes Sir. It was only minor though, the peo-" I begun as he stopped me. "I've seen worst he grumbled. But don't worry, you'll be treated accordingly." He smirked. "Do you guys have...names?" I studded. "You really think bots are smart enough to out do a ROBLOXIAN?" He laughed "It's Red678, or Red." |
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diuto717
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| 04 Jul 2013 12:45 PM |
| Can't wait for more, and I want to see what you do with the people who want to be in this. |
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| 04 Jul 2013 12:48 PM |
| [[MSG]] Sorry, thought I changed this, the title of Chapter 2 is, "The Way to Death." |
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Red678
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| 04 Jul 2013 01:25 PM |
Ideas ---------------------- 1: Add me as a witty guy who is dressed fancy and has a Scottish accent, banned for an "inappropriate" joke.
2: Add me as a muscular fantastic man with a flowing beard and tons of babes; banned for ODing, who always makes false assumptions and has a very high voice, so he'd say something along the lines of "well u r prolly not have girlfriend". (It's fun to be the villain sometimes ;c)
3: Add me as a guy dressed in really expensive stuff with a laptop and typing really fast; banned for stealing accounts and the lot.
4: er whatever you want I guess.
~ this isn't really a siggy just something I added cus I can
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| 04 Jul 2013 02:20 PM |
Put me in :3
I haz a perfect explanation and stuffz. I say inappropiate things alot so I get thrown into banland. They know about my swordfighting ability so they give me an offer. Join us or be banned. Of course I joined them.
My apparel is a robloxian in 'The Overseer' package,with an emerald void thrasher. I also have dual illuminas c:
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| 04 Jul 2013 03:09 PM |
Chapter 3; Trial ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- After five minutes of being blindly shoved around, I was dropped on what seemed like a marble floor. "Take the sack off him." Demanded a familiar voice. "Yes, Sir!" Red replied. As my vision once again cleared what saw amazed me. It appeared to be some sort of courtroom. And lined in the jury on both sides, were admins, in the middle of the room was a small, black lake. Judging the case, was a character I hadn't quite met yet.
"Order!" The man demanded. Immediately everyone silenced. "Ah Jay, I am assuming that you do not know me?" He asked "Yes umm, Sir." I threw back. "So you agree to your crimes, breaking the ROBLOXIAN rules of scamming, handed from generation to generation since the beginning of our race?" He questioned. "Yes Sir but i-" I fumbled before he broke in. "You are under a truthful case in a quite unique court. Any lie will cost you dearly." He loudly proclaimed. "Then yes Sir, I did scam those people." I admitted shyly. "I will be asking you several questions, we are in no need of witnesses for we have already determined the crime, and it's validation." He told me.
"Now, how much ROBUX did you take in all?"
"Twenty thousand, Sir."
"Mhm, how much did each shirt cost?"
"Two hundred ROBUX."
"And how long has this crime been put in action?"
"Two months."
"Okay, that is all. You will be fined seven and a half million ROBUX, if you can not afford that, twenty years in Ban land. This is a serious case of scamming. If you had gone for several hundred ROBUX you would have only had a minor fine." He declared. "But Sir, Merely could hardly afford that!" I pleaded desperately. "Then twenty years it is." He chuckled. "Be prepared to find ROBLOX a different place after your time."
"No!" I screamed. Ban land as anyone would know was a horrid, dark realm, over run by spamming noobs, and even hackers. "Is there anything I can do! Can't I go to some other confinement! " I cried "Escort him please." The judge asked. I was picked up, and thrown in the same black lake I had marveled ten minutes ago.
It was then that everything came black, I couldn't see a thing as I free fell. Free fell to Ban Land. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [[MSG]] I have changed chapter two's title. Check in the comments. |
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| 04 Jul 2013 03:12 PM |
| I'll try my best to fit in everyone. |
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| 04 Jul 2013 03:14 PM |
Add me,
Duckdude112,
terminated for cancelling BC before the charge arrived. |
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| 04 Jul 2013 03:15 PM |
Hi.
My main, Recesity, is banned.
Recesity also happens to be a Hivemind of one (yes, a Hivemind of one, shut up) murderous, caps-loving, sword-wielding, anarchic, patriotic...Er...Murderer.
Use that as you will. |
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