LosVider
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| 27 Jun 2013 09:42 PM |
The White Dragon Project (WDP) is a secret government organization where teenage spies are trained to leave their bodies, using astral projection to travel around the world. You are a thief. You robbed the wrong house. You are captured, but the Project leaders quickly realize you have a special gift. And when a key operative-the director's daughter, Opal goes missing, you are offered a choice: join the White Dragon or go to jail. You join and are quickly sent to investigate the Project's current target: a worldwide terrorist organization known as the Sword of Wrath. But as you get deeper, you discover both the White Dragon and the Sword of Wrath are far more than it seams.
You start on your first mission, which I will leave to you to decide.
-=CS=- Nam.e: A.ge (15-30): Team (WDP or SW): Squad: Codename: Appearance: Item(s): Height: Weight: Bio:
-=My CS=- Nam.e: Cole Vaultin A.ge (15-30): 18 Team (WDP or SW): WDP Squad: Calvader Squad Codename: Vaulty Appearance: Tall, roughly 6'2, with short brown hair, bangs swept to the right. Tanned skin with minor cuts here and there. Item(s): A M1911 with a silencer, some rope, and a rusty combat knife. Clothing: A white t-shirt covered by a brown hoodie, unzipped. Dark jeans and a pair of grunged up converse. Height: 6'2 Weight: 154 pounds, close to average. Bio: Cole was raised in a city of vermin. He quickly learned how to defend himself. He knows what to take and what not. When he was 14, his parents died of cancer. He learned how to live alone, and prefers the solitude.
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AlphaX10
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| 27 Jun 2013 09:43 PM |
| This is incredibly stupid. |
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LosVider
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| 27 Jun 2013 09:44 PM |
| Thank for constructive criticism. Now GTFO off my post. |
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| 27 Jun 2013 09:52 PM |
Nam.e: Oliver Jackson A.ge (15-30): 16 Team (WDP or SW): WDP Squad: Unknown Codename: Boom Appearance:He has jet black hair,slicked back,with brown eyes,and pale skin Item(s): TNT,Grenades,Sticky Grenades,Time Bombs Height: 5,1" Weight: 92 lb. Bio: Oliver was born in California,he tends to be a gentleman to ladies,but seems to be rough on other males,he is slick,sly and sneaky,he's also mysterious,as he doesn't talk about himself much,he became a thief to support his family,as they were going to go poor soon.
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LosVider
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| 27 Jun 2013 10:01 PM |
(squee.)
Accepted. Want to wait for one more person to join or just go ahead and start? |
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| 27 Jun 2013 10:06 PM |
| It may be a little time before someone joins,and if we start,they'll be confused,so let's wait. |
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LosVider
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hatfat121
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| 27 Jun 2013 10:21 PM |
Nam.e: Bob Mc'Merchant A.ge (15-30): 18 Team (WDP or SW): WDP Squad: Calvader Squad Codename: Vender Appearance: Short, around 5'1, greased brown hair. pale white skin. Item(s): Desert Eagle, Pocket knife, A box of matches. Clothing: Rags with a cowl, brown pants worn out black shoes Height: 5'1 Weight: 149 pounds Bio: Bob was born in a forest in the middle of nowhere. As a kid he found and collected random things of which he sold to people he met. Throughout his entire child hood he was a merchant, but lately he could not find as many items that people would like to buy. As a result he got in to theivery.
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LosVider
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| 27 Jun 2013 10:25 PM |
| (( I made you a song, Hatfat. Oh, and accepted. )) |
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hatfat121
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LosVider
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| 27 Jun 2013 10:32 PM |
I don't actually feel like RPing tonight (but yet i can make a song lolo ) so I'll start in the morning maybe. Anyway, here is a teaser for how I will end it.
The object shoots from the ground, throwing cement at us. The initial force of the blow knocks out the way. Reganing my ability to run, I sprint over to the ladder and pull myself up the rusty rungs. A loud mo.an can be heard in the whole facility, and the object's 'nose' lounges at an agent, killing him. I turn and climb onto the second platform.
/ban floodcheck
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LosVider
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| 27 Jun 2013 10:36 PM |
(( Nevermind, typing that wants to make me roleplay. ))
Cole
-PROLOUGE- I climb up the ladder to the patch-work roof. A foul stench lingers in the air. I turn, my neck rustling my jacket. I hunker down as the guard brings his gun up. He clicks his flashlight on.
-CHAPTER 1-
I click the flash light off and wipe the blood of the knife. A clap of thunder riddles the air. I wonder why I wasn't expecting rain, considering it was rather humid. Ignoring it, I push the body off the roof onto a balcony. His hollow body echoes off the raised platform, alerting nearby guards. I bolt out of the scene, heading towards a large dome. |
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| 27 Jun 2013 10:44 PM |
Oliver
"Agent Boom is in the base,Melinda. Over." I whispered into the walkie-talkie,I ducked down as I heard echoing voices. "So,Sir Blackbank,if you're already the richest man in the state,why did you steal the emerald?" Blackbank.. I hate that man. "You see,Hans,I want more money,Johnson seems to be catching up in cash,and I will not let him ruin me." Blackbank responded. I threw a sticky grenade to a nearby door.
"1..2..3..Boom." As I said those words,the grenade exploded. I spotted Blackbank and Hans run towards the scene. I snooped past the two. "Making my way to the emerald. Over." |
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| 28 Jun 2013 11:40 AM |
| This is incredibly idiotic. |
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| 28 Jun 2013 11:59 AM |
| I've seen a book related to this rp..... |
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AlphaX10
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| 28 Jun 2013 12:00 PM |
"The White Dragon Project (WDP) is a secret government organization where teenage spies are trained to leave their bodies, using astral projection to travel around the world."
Why teenagers? Also, I doubt that astral projection is more effective than sending a physical agent.
"You are a thief. You robbed the wrong house. You are captured, but the Project leaders quickly realize you have a special gift. And when a key operative-the director's daughter, Opal goes missing, you are offered a choice: join the White Dragon or go to jail."
So everyone who joins the program was a thief? What kind of secret government organization sets up a sting operation to capture thieves, how do they know you have 'a special gift'? There's absolutely no flexibility when it comes to making a character backstory because you've already written it. Everyone will have the exact same reason for being in the program, which is boring to say the least.
I think that a government organization who forces teenagers to choose between the possibility of death or going to jail (with no risk of death) is no better than the terrorist organization they are hunting. But you also have the fact that the jail sentence for the robbery would probably be shorter than your obligated service in the program.
"You join and are quickly sent to investigate the Project's current target: a worldwide terrorist organization known as the Sword of Wrath. But as you get deeper, you discover both the White Dragon and the Sword of Wrath are far more than it seams."
It's obviously a good idea to send in people you just forced to join your organization into a covert war without any training, not. |
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| 28 Jun 2013 12:02 PM |
| That's..actually a good point. |
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LosVider
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| 28 Jun 2013 07:53 PM |
@Who ever said this was from a book
It is. It's just not well known.
@Everyone else.
This is dead. Remind me to GTFO off the RP forums. |
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