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| 20 Jun 2013 06:34 PM |
An OT Las Vegas Trip [Shadowfan is standing] Creator: Shadowfan682. [Shadowfan walks down the streets] [Bingo Bango Bongo is playing as he walks] Zakro: Oh, hey Shadowfan. [Shadowfan waves hi] [OTers walking down the streets] PrincessMidna: With that big iron on his hip Big Iron on his hip. Characters: Shadowfan682 Zakro Litemare Boyned Grayssake StarWarsBronyEX 67Thave Danerocks99 Danipie2 PrincessMidna Zenmax13 Additional Characters: Casino Owner Vance Gamblers Bartender Eric Aidan Brian Monica David Selene Joe Alex Davis Johnson Director: Shadowfan682 An OT Las Vegas Trip Part 1: The Contest [Shadowfan is sitting at home] TV: So today and today only you and 11 Friends can win a trip to Las Vegas! Shadowfan: That is it! I can enter me and 10 OTers in a contest! [Shadowfan runs] Shadowfan: Hey guys! Want to enter a contest? Zakro: Sure, why not? All the Other Main Cast members: Why not? TV Announcer: These are our contestants! [Shows all 11 Cast members] Shadowfan: We will win this! [They enter their names into a pallet] Shadowfan: All we can do is hope. [Five minutes later] TV Announcer: Our winners are… THE LAST 11 CONTESTANTS! Shadowfan: VICTORY SCREECH! [All the main cast members do the victory screech] TV Announcer: Here is where we will give you this tour bus as Monica provides you with free touring of Las Vegas and your 5 week stay at a hotel in Las Vegas! Shadowfan: This is too much and I like it! Thanks everybody! END OF ACT 1
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| 20 Jun 2013 06:36 PM |
| You might be an additional Character as I might squeeze you in there. |
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| 20 Jun 2013 06:42 PM |
| This is such absolute dung I cannot help but think it's satire. |
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| 22 Jun 2013 04:37 PM |
ACT 2: The Trip Shadowfan: Let me drive! Zakro: NO! Let me DRIVE! [A big fight occurs] Zakro: I need to drive! Monica: Stop this fight. Listen, you want to ride to Las Vegas? Zakro and Shadowfan: Yeah. Monica: THEN YOU TWO GET YOURSELF IN A SEAT! Shadowfan: Sheesh. Zakro: Geez. [Rock Around The Clock plays as Monica turns on the radio] [Shows a montage of people playing a bus game, the main characters singing along] [The song ends as the OTers cool down] Zenmax13: Wow that was certainly awesome! Monica: We’re at Vegas. Shadowfan: WOOHOO! END OF ACT 2
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farway
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| 22 Jun 2013 04:46 PM |
| You and Boiled are additional characters. |
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| 23 Jun 2013 10:55 AM |
ACT 3: The Casino Shadowfan: These look like interesting things. Zenmax13: You know what those are, right? Shadowfan: A Casino? Zenmax13: Ding! Correct!!! Zakro: Let’s walk in! Danerocks99: I’d rather be watching Winx Club. [They walk in as Sing, Sing, Sing by Benny Goodman plays] [A brief montage is shown of the camera looking at the bar, the slots and the Band] Shadowfan: Sheesh. Zakro: Whoa. Litemare: My God. 67Thave: Hey band! Band member One: Yeah? 67Thave: Play my favorite show’s theme! Band member 2: No. 67Thave: But why? Is it too good? Band Member 4: No. It’s horrible. 67Thave: Aw. Bartender: How may I serve you fellas today? Shadowfan: I would like one Diet Coke. Zakro: One Drink, shaken not stirred. Shadowfan: I change my mind I want what Zakro is going to get. Rest of Main Cast: We all want what Zakro is getting. [They sat down and drank] Shadowfan: Yep. Drunk Bartender: Hey fellas! Gambler 1: Huh? 16 More Gamblers: What? Drunken Bartender: BAR FIGHT! [Shadowfan slams a chair into Zakro] [Litemare kicks Danerocks99 in his testicles] Danerocks99: OH GOD! [Danerocks99 punches Litemare in the face] [PrincessMidna throws a bottle of Root b33r at a Gambler] [Zenmax13 grabs a gun and shoots it around] Casino Owner Vance: ALRIGHT EVERYBODY! I WANT YOU GUYS TO STOP!!! Drunken David: Oh god… All the rest of the drunken cast: Oh God is right. Casino Owner Vance: OH GOD IS RIGHT! YAWL FORGOT ABOUT ME! [The fight continues as then everybody is lying on the ground] [Zakro wakes up and sees the Casino fixed] Confused Zakro: Oh my… what happened? Shadowfan: We all had a bar fight. Zakro: Oh yeah… [Everybody gets up, some dazed and some confused] Shadowfan: Let’s get outta here. [Everyone walks out] End of ACT 3
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| 23 Jun 2013 10:58 AM |
| This is so bad oh my god it's dreadful. |
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YoshiFTW
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:00 AM |
"monica"
oh, for flygon's sake you forgot the T
also can I be in pretty please? <3 |
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:07 AM |
| I wanna be gambling like 007 surrounded by hot women |
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:13 AM |
try to think of a part 5
trying to scoop something out of this
"Ouch, said A, and continued on." |
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:30 AM |
| I already have an Idea for ACT 4. So what happens is as the main cast leaves the casino they encounter their bus destroyed as cops investigate. But guess what? The drunk Main cast had been destroying the bus. |
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:31 AM |
add pls I want to be a blackjack addict |
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Skellor
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:32 AM |
so
how many times have you said you were going to stop writing stories |
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:32 AM |
well time to animate this
I mean Venusaur...with a question mark |
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:34 AM |
| Nevermind I dont want to be involved with this horrible story |
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YoshiFTW
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:34 AM |
| please please can I be in it please? c: |
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Awkrin
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| 23 Jun 2013 11:35 AM |
| I not going to Vegas? Why not, you make me sad. |
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