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Re: ✩ Chanel G ft. Rachel- Shooting Stars ✩

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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
Joined: 12 Apr 2013
Total Posts: 582
19 Jun 2013 02:29 PM
[Verse I] (Chanel)

I wish right now sounds lovely
I wish I could get it like that *snap*- easily
But for now I'm stuck out here
Watchin the stars go by in the cosmetic atmosphere
If anything, money is your shooting star
Buying you rings, and shiny cars.
Pretty much any myth out there- I've heard it.
But let me repeat them, let me re-work it.
Blowin candles off the cake
Is honestly too much that I can take
I wanna believe these things, it's true
But honestly have any of these worked for you?

They told me to "try it again" well I decline.
So before I give up, somebody gimme a sign.

[Chorus] Right now I could use a Shooting Star
'cause we all know how life is hard
I've used every trick known to man
I've done everything that I can
I'm sitting outside gazing stars
But I'm searching for that one Shooting Star...

[Verse II] (Rachel)

I'm wishing on the shooting star that I'm looking for
I never find it, but I keep wishing more
Cause right now I wish it was the first thing I saw
I'm sick of hunting for this star
Remember? Money is your shooting star?
Cause I remember making a wish when I was young
On one of those shooting stars, right across the skyline- It flung
And I wished for something stupid Just like I knew I would
I wish it had ended up like it should
Cause I'm sick of looking for signs
Somebody give me a hint, maybe just a few lines?
Does wishes on shooting stars really come true?
I know I have made a few
But right now, all I want is a shooting star..

They told me to "try it again" well I decline.
So before I give up, somebody gimme a sign.

[Chorus]

I have no more pennies to throw in the fountain
But let's just say I'm still climbin up that mountain
And I don't wanna make this sound even more cliche,
But I need a shooting star to come and save me.

[Chorus] Right now I could use a Shooting Star
'cause we all know how life is hard
I've used every trick known to man
I've done everything that I can
I'm sitting outside gazing stars
But I'm searching for that one Shooting Star...
I'm searching for that one Shooting Star...

Thank you for reading ^3^ Please rate so we can improve!! :D



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BillboardHot100 is not online. BillboardHot100
Joined: 28 May 2013
Total Posts: 7
19 Jun 2013 02:32 PM
9/10. Great message.
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minniem is not online. minniem
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19 Jun 2013 02:35 PM
9/10. ^_^
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DancingQueen24 is not online. DancingQueen24
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19 Jun 2013 02:47 PM
10/10. Amazing song!
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johnb is not online. johnb
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19 Jun 2013 02:59 PM
dont be throwin out 10s that easily, yo, nothing is a perfect 10 (not even you, dancingqueen)
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johnb is not online. johnb
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19 Jun 2013 03:01 PM
cosmetic atmosphere
_______
That sounds awkward and doesn't make any sense. Why not use "cosmos?" Or am I missing something "deep" in calling the atmosphere "cosmetic?"
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cutiepiemacy is not online. cutiepiemacy
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19 Jun 2013 03:04 PM
Dunno why but I like cosmetic atmosphere a little better. it made the pace go a little faster lol. But anyways, 8/10.
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
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19 Jun 2013 03:07 PM
No, it just sounds awkward and stilted, and on top of that it doesn't make any sense, kind of like the rest of the stream of consciousness crap in the other stanzas.
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mistyrose24 is not online. mistyrose24
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19 Jun 2013 03:33 PM
Oh well I like this song. 9/10! ^_^
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ChanelG is not online. ChanelG
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19 Jun 2013 03:41 PM
Oh pardon me Lol I meant to say cosmic* ^-^
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johnb is not online. johnb
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19 Jun 2013 03:46 PM
There you go, big ups
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DancingQueen24 is not online. DancingQueen24
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19 Jun 2013 07:34 PM
@johnb. uh I know nothing is perfect. (I know not even me, I don't think I am but ok).
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