ChanelG
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| 19 Jun 2013 02:29 PM |
[Verse I] (Chanel)
I wish right now sounds lovely I wish I could get it like that *snap*- easily But for now I'm stuck out here Watchin the stars go by in the cosmetic atmosphere If anything, money is your shooting star Buying you rings, and shiny cars. Pretty much any myth out there- I've heard it. But let me repeat them, let me re-work it. Blowin candles off the cake Is honestly too much that I can take I wanna believe these things, it's true But honestly have any of these worked for you?
They told me to "try it again" well I decline. So before I give up, somebody gimme a sign.
[Chorus] Right now I could use a Shooting Star 'cause we all know how life is hard I've used every trick known to man I've done everything that I can I'm sitting outside gazing stars But I'm searching for that one Shooting Star...
[Verse II] (Rachel)
I'm wishing on the shooting star that I'm looking for I never find it, but I keep wishing more Cause right now I wish it was the first thing I saw I'm sick of hunting for this star Remember? Money is your shooting star? Cause I remember making a wish when I was young On one of those shooting stars, right across the skyline- It flung And I wished for something stupid Just like I knew I would I wish it had ended up like it should Cause I'm sick of looking for signs Somebody give me a hint, maybe just a few lines? Does wishes on shooting stars really come true? I know I have made a few But right now, all I want is a shooting star..
They told me to "try it again" well I decline. So before I give up, somebody gimme a sign.
[Chorus]
I have no more pennies to throw in the fountain But let's just say I'm still climbin up that mountain And I don't wanna make this sound even more cliche, But I need a shooting star to come and save me.
[Chorus] Right now I could use a Shooting Star 'cause we all know how life is hard I've used every trick known to man I've done everything that I can I'm sitting outside gazing stars But I'm searching for that one Shooting Star... I'm searching for that one Shooting Star...
Thank you for reading ^3^ Please rate so we can improve!! :D
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minniem
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johnb
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| 19 Jun 2013 02:59 PM |
| dont be throwin out 10s that easily, yo, nothing is a perfect 10 (not even you, dancingqueen) |
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johnb
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| 19 Jun 2013 03:01 PM |
cosmetic atmosphere _______ That sounds awkward and doesn't make any sense. Why not use "cosmos?" Or am I missing something "deep" in calling the atmosphere "cosmetic?" |
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| 19 Jun 2013 03:04 PM |
| Dunno why but I like cosmetic atmosphere a little better. it made the pace go a little faster lol. But anyways, 8/10. |
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johnb
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| 19 Jun 2013 03:07 PM |
| No, it just sounds awkward and stilted, and on top of that it doesn't make any sense, kind of like the rest of the stream of consciousness crap in the other stanzas. |
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| 19 Jun 2013 03:33 PM |
| Oh well I like this song. 9/10! ^_^ |
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ChanelG
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| 19 Jun 2013 03:41 PM |
| Oh pardon me Lol I meant to say cosmic* ^-^ |
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johnb
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| 19 Jun 2013 07:34 PM |
| @johnb. uh I know nothing is perfect. (I know not even me, I don't think I am but ok). |
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