HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:02 PM |
This is a freeplay roleplay. All I need to know is:
RP Name RP Gender RP Age Description
Should like this:
My CS Name: Gender Age Description
Rules: Please use correct grammar Read all done RP before posting Follow the 2 rules |
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:03 PM |
| (Sorry, there is supposed to be : after gender, age, and description!) |
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:03 PM |
Go join some role-plays first.
This is not a proper way to post a role-play. It needs a plot, rules, and CS. |
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:06 PM |
My CS Name: Aaron Gender: Male Age: 18 Description: Spiked brown hair, a goatee, a handlebar, jeans, a ripped t-shirt, Nikes, and no socks.
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:07 PM |
| (I have, and I am starting the roleplay now, which will explain the plot) |
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:09 PM |
| Well, we need a plot to understand what we're doing and what it is about. Not a whole role-play to explain the plot. |
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:11 PM |
| Plot: The world is ending. The apocolipse has ended, but a 'colony' of people have made it out alive. What will happen next? No one knows. You and your group wonder what will be made of you. But as you ponder and look for the answer, a huge black mist fills the land. |
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HawkBlue
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Seblene
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:14 PM |
| Sorry, but you didn't spell Apocalypse right...you need a little more behind the plot, as well. |
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:15 PM |
| (Oh, sorry about the spelling. Yeah, I do need more, but I'm out of ideas! Can you give me some?) |
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Seblene
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:16 PM |
| (Well the apocalypse idea is a bit overused in the first place. I don't really want to give you ideas, but I think maybe you should come up with a more original idea first. I'm not insulting, just suggesting!) |
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:18 PM |
| (How about a big storm or something wiped away a lot of existence? Then this group found each other and has to work together to find more people.) |
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Seblene
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:20 PM |
| (That's a lot better. Maybe more detail in the CS, as well. A bio and personality and the items the character has would help.) |
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:29 PM |
Name: Beluga Prime Gender: None. He acts like a beluga Age: 78 Race (WE NEED THIS): Beluga Cyborg Description: It was built by a lonely scientist, living in the arctic was experimenting on a beluga corpse when he added pieces of his old robot, U-Prime. The scientist had given it an AI and the Beluga escaped the moment after he was given the AI. |
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:35 PM |
(Ok, here is the changed stuff)
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Name: Age: Gender: Description: What you wear: Bio: Personality: Items: Weapons:(Optional)
Plot: The rain pounded against the street. All the families of the world were thinking, "Oh, it's just a storm". But storm was all across the world at the same time. That was weird. But as the sun set in some countries and rose in others, a huge wind blew against the ground. Everything in it's past was destroyed, and many lives were lost. You woke up to find yourself laying around a bunch of debris. Your clothes were ripped, and you were (at least you thought) alone. You looked around to see many other people laying around you. Many were dead, but one was breathing. It was your task to wake them up and find others. |
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HawkBlue
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:41 PM |
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Name: Aaron Age: 18 Gender: Male Description: Tall with spiked hair, a goatee, and a handlebar. What you wear: Nikes, jeans, a ripped t-shirt, and no socks. Bio: He lived in Miami until the storm hit, and had a sister, a mom, and a dad. Personality: Funny, but can be serious (which is funny), and ongoing. Items: a small photo of his family. Weapons: A small pistol which he keeps strapped to his jeans.
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Seblene
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| 17 Jun 2013 01:42 PM |
(A ROUND OF APPLAUSE FOR YOU, SIR. Much better xD)
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HawkBlue
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 02:25 PM |
(Now I'll start it)
Aaron
I felt the hard ground beneath my aching body as I awoke from what I thought was a nightmare. The debris around me made me think I was still dreaming. I pinched myself, only to make myself wince in pain. I stood up, realizing this was not a dream. It was reality. |
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HawkBlue
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| 17 Jun 2013 05:52 PM |
Aaron
I noticed that nobody was alive, and that I was alone. I sat down and thought. I thought about myself and what happened. |
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| 17 Jun 2013 08:57 PM |
Name: Alexander "Alex" Reid Age: 16. Gender: Male. Description: Average man height/weight, slicked back brown hair, blue eyes, and scar across eye. What You Wear: Black shades, black bandana (across mouth), Black hoodie with white t-shirt, blue jeans, and black fingerless gloves. Bio: Being a high school dropout, Alex is a silent person, but not an emo, he was always picked on as he went up grades, but that never really bothered him. His parents were concerned about him, since they didn't want him to get tortured. Personality: Silent, with a great sense of humor, always sticking to the group, leaving no one behind. Weapon(s): Five-Seven, with only a clip. |
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Seblene
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| 17 Jun 2013 09:07 PM |
Name: Rumour Carter Age: 15 Gender: Female Description: She has long, straight blonde hair cut in Scene style (if ya don't know what it is, look it up :D). She has pale skin and bright blue eyes. She's 5' 2" and weighs 100lbs. What you wear: A white tank top, light blue distressed jeans, and black leather combat boots with buckles. She has a black leather jacket, as well. Bio: Rumour had an abusive father and a depressed mother. She had to learn to take care of herself. She was a loner in high school, and eventually became depressed herself. She finds it very hard to trust anyone but herself. Personality: Quiet and cold, but not mean. She's smart and stays calm in tricky situations, but she's very blunt and doesn't care what other people think of her. But when she's alone, she's very sad. Items: A messenger bag where she keeps a notebook, pencil, water, her weapons, and anything else. Weapons: A small swiss army knife, and a black hunting knife. |
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| 18 Jun 2013 06:38 AM |
| (I forgot to add that he has black and white Nikes) |
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HawkBlue
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| 18 Jun 2013 07:01 AM |
| (Both are approved, now you can start to RP off what I've done.) |
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