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| 16 Jun 2013 05:18 AM |
Measage:The first verse is a poem i read and the second verse is my rap so Happy fathers day!
Rap:He never made a fortune, or a noise In the world where men are seeking after fame; But he had a healthy brood of girls and boys Who loved the very ground on which he trod. They thought him just little short of God; Oh you should have heard the way they said his name Father.There seemed to be a loving little prayer In their voices, even when they called him Dad Though the man was never heard of anywhere, As a hero, yet somehow understood He was doing well his part and making good; And you knew it, by the way his children had Of saying Father. (Beat flows) Chrous:It matters not that Time has shed His thawless snow upon your head, For he maintains, with wondrous art, Perpetual summer in your heart." William Hamilton Hayne (1856-1929)
Rap:Yh fathers day's up and ima say i love my dad truly and fully, ima keep on living ima keep on dreaming (Beat truns Hip for 13 secs)#Life is a word and turns like a remix we have problems but get em right at the finished rap is my sport music is my taste i'll never give up until i solve my case when its my day to shine ima domy best becuz its my game and i hav a test
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Chrous:It matters not that Time has shed His thawless snow upon your head, For he maintains, with wondrous art, Perpetual summer in your heart." William Hamilton Hayne (1856-1929)
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johnb
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| 16 Jun 2013 05:38 AM |
Big ups, bro
Let me spit my father's day verse:
Yo, I'm his baby he my daddy He let me ride in the backseat of his caddy Man was MEDi And ready to get down 4 the clown My father was jacked Sort of like a lumberjack Come at you with a knife and you'll never come back From the dead, yo, like some Night of the Living Dead s[EDIT] You know my dad landed a job and he never quit This rhyme is well thought out and well spit My daddy went out with some money and bought a fire pit On my forehead he popped the zit He let me listen to Big K.R.I.T. Man was cool, sort of like a Miller Light militant Setting up tents when we campin and s[EDIT] He was always a straight riydah, no doubt about it Especially when I saw he had two girls in his apartment I love my daddy with all my heart He used to shove my head under the covers when he made a big fart And his apple pie used to taste so tart
CHORUS: Uh, uh, uh I love my daddy, yeah yeah I love my daddy, oooooooooh I love my daddy, uh uh, I love my daddy, broooooooooooo |
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| 16 Jun 2013 12:09 PM |
| I give this song 1.5. I didn't hear munch rapping. Chorus' are just Quotes, Put something in there that about your dad, Not quotes. |
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| 18 Jun 2013 02:00 PM |
| there is no way that is urs, its better than ur skool work |
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ducky980
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| 18 Jun 2013 03:02 PM |
| you dont like your dad do you |
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