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| 16 Jun 2013 12:30 AM |
Ever since the winning of the war, the inhabitants of Arcadia have been celebrating endlessly, especially the city of New Alexandria. Because of this, the emperor of this glorious nation, Castellian, decided he would go and visit the city for the celebrations.
It has been 5 days since the Emperor's arrival in the city, causing uproar in the city. All these events, and the continuous hostility with Vaktovia began to take it's toll on Castellian. One night, he decided to take a quick little stroll through the city, to have time by himself.
Castellian opened the door of his ship, letting a cool breeze drift inside. He buttoned up his robe, and stepped outside. The ship was parked near the fruit stands, giving a long distance between the park and Castellian. He swiftly hurried through the streets, almost jogging by the time he got to the bridge. Finally, he arrived at the park, and took a seat on one of the benches.
He rested his head on the back of the bench, feeling the cold wind on his face. Closing his eyes with the feeling of relaxation, he began to drift into sleep. Just as he was about to do so, he suddenly heard a rustling in the grass, as if someone was sneaking by. Castellian quickly stood up, and reached for his holstered pistol. "Who's there?" he called out, scanning the area. Silence. Thinking it was just the wind, he sat down. Again, he heard the rustling, this time behind the grand, stone statue. He got up again, and creeped to the statue.
Pistol now in hand, he inched slowly to the backside of the statue. The rustling grew louder each step he took closer. Now at the edge of the statue's base, he held his pistol close to his chest, took a breath, and quickly stepped around the corner. He held his pistol up, his finger on the trigger. Then did he realize, there was nothing there. Breathing a sigh of relief, he turned around and started back to the bench. Just as he turned around, an arm reached out around his neck, and slammed him against the wall, knocking the pistol out of his hand.
The mysterious figure now had Castellian pinned up against the wall, unable to do anything. It had it's face directly infront of Castellian's, feeling his warm breath. "What do you want? Let me go!" Castellian yelled out. "Silence," it said, covering his mouth. Something about this person's voice was oddly familiar to Castellian. "You don't want to cause a ruckus." After a moment of thought, Castellian immediately knew who it was.
"It's been a while, old friend," he heard Vaktus' voice say.
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bleh rate how bad/good this was, did it in a rush. |
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| 16 Jun 2013 12:33 AM |
Pretty nice Add Vaktus with his mask |
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| 16 Jun 2013 12:35 AM |
| I might continue, if I get more positive reviews. |
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sirbudy1
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| 16 Jun 2013 12:36 AM |
seems kinky not bad
blue footed booby |
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| 16 Jun 2013 01:58 AM |
| Not bad. Try including more details from your setting. |
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| 16 Jun 2013 01:59 AM |
Very good, You will keep me up all night now
Make some more :D |
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| 16 Jun 2013 02:01 AM |
@Tha Yeah, I have a bit of trouble with adding details.
@Fear Thanks. |
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Vitiosus
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| 16 Jun 2013 02:04 AM |
Pretty nice Longer if you can, satisy us cretins kk |
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| 16 Jun 2013 02:07 AM |
Thanks for the positive reviews.
Now, I wrote this when I was bored, so I didn't really plan this one out too much.
How would you guys want me to continue this? |
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| 16 Jun 2013 02:08 AM |
| Continue it. Send me links tomorrow if you're one of those stay-up-all nighters. |
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| 16 Jun 2013 02:12 AM |
Amazing
Send me links when done |
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sirbudy1
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| 16 Jun 2013 02:13 AM |
make it into a love story
blue footed booby |
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| 16 Jun 2013 02:19 AM |
| O wait Vaktus is in it, now it is a comedy |
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