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bella72002 is not online. bella72002
Joined: 11 Aug 2012
Total Posts: 103
04 Jun 2013 03:11 PM
Don't judge me..

Hurting In The Past
Its like I don't have feelings.
Am I not alive.
Its like your not afraid to hurt me
Cause it works every time you try
I'm losing my voice now
From all the crying I did
And you don't even know me
Its like I'm just some little kid

Everyone says to ignore you
But its really hard
Its kind of impossible
To always be on guard
Everyone says it will end soon
But they don't know how long it will last
When all of it ends, Ill still be broken
From the hurting in the past
Hurting in the past...

Ill never forget
All the harsh things you said
Nothing can remove the words
You left in my head
And I hope you listen to the words I sing
And I hope you know that
To stop all the hurting and for us to be friends,
I would give everything

Everyone says to ignore you
But its really hard
Its kind of impossible
To always be on guard
Everyone says it will end soon
But they don't know how long it will last
When all of it ends, Ill still be broken
From the hurting in the past
Hurting in the past...

I just want to remind you
That the words I sing
Are very true
And don't forget the happy memories
We had
When we were friends...

Everyone says to ignore you...
But its getting really hard...
Because its basically impossible...
To always be on guard...
Yeah.
Everyone says to ignore you
But its really hard
Its kind of impossible
To always be on guard
Everyone says it will end soon
But they don't know how long it will last
When all of it ends, Ill still be broken
From the hurting in the past
Hurting in the past...

Its like I don't have feelings.
Am I not alive.
Its like your not afraid to hurt me
Cause it works every time...

Pleaseeeeee rate out of 10... if its bad, tell me because I don't want to waste my life writing bad songs. xD So yeah. You probably got here from my blurb xP
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iwantmykfc is not online. iwantmykfc
Joined: 22 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 11842
04 Jun 2013 03:13 PM
stop
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toxicdude82 is not online. toxicdude82
Joined: 21 Aug 2010
Total Posts: 36
04 Jun 2013 04:55 PM
It's more of a poem than a song. I do write songs, and I am renowned for poems and I would honestly say what you wrote is very Cliché. It has to be said, not only is the grammar atrocious, but what exactly is in this I don't know about already? If I were you, I wouldn't really try to pursue this aspect of life.
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violetcries is not online. violetcries
Joined: 27 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 6117
04 Jun 2013 04:58 PM
1/10 sorry, I can relate to it though but the friend thing, you would want someone who bullies you to be your friend.
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LouisThomas11 is not online. LouisThomas11
Joined: 14 Dec 2011
Total Posts: 6988
04 Jun 2013 05:00 PM
#bully OP
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slendermanroadkill is not online. slendermanroadkill
Joined: 25 Feb 2013
Total Posts: 19
04 Jun 2013 05:01 PM
that was touching i rate it 10/10
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Shadybrute is not online. Shadybrute
Joined: 02 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 1725
04 Jun 2013 05:23 PM
*wrote

get out
you will be bullied more on here
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jaylenjohnson2 is not online. jaylenjohnson2
Joined: 05 Apr 2010
Total Posts: 1585
04 Jun 2013 05:26 PM
Bullying will never stop.
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johnb is not online. johnb
Joined: 21 Nov 2007
Total Posts: 24998
04 Jun 2013 05:50 PM
Bullying will stop if we bust out the knives bro
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bella72002 is not online. bella72002
Joined: 11 Aug 2012
Total Posts: 103
04 Jun 2013 06:01 PM
Okay. So many people I have to reply to in this one message. Yay. -_-

@iwantmykfc Stop what...

@toxicdude82 Sorry, but I didn't understand half of what you said. But for one, the grammar wasn't totally trash. And two, well, the punctuation on my laptop when I wrote the song was all weird. Most of it when you pressed it was accented E's. The grammar I had was from autocorrect. But I could put in periods.

@violetcries Well, they are bullying you and you want it to stop, if they were your friend they would stop, right? You picking up what I'm putting down? But anyways, a few girls used to be mean to me and a few friends and now were all friends. Its like forgive and forget.

@LouisThomas11 What the heck...

@slendermanroadkill Thank you sooo much! :D

@Shadybrute All that I'm trying to do is to see if people think my song is good. ANd you are helping the people who are bullying me. And its called a typo, you twit.

@jaylenjohnson2 Well, I know it won't, but being bullied yourself can stop.

Well, many things I would like to say. First, I write a song about being bullied, and only 1 person says its good. Yeah. Second, I'm only 11, do you honestly think I could write a hit album... haha, no. Third, I wrote this in about 15 minutes. I didn't do my best. Fourth, this wasn't even related to a real experience. Even though I can relate, I randomly wrote this song, cause what I can relate to is over now. Fifth, This was really hard, trying to write a sad sad song when I'm a HAPPY HAPPY girl :D So, next time, I will write a happy, up-beat song. And last but not least, Sixth, I know I said to be honest and give me your opinion, but some of these comments hurt my feelings, so lets all lie to Bella and tell her she did good :D
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LouisThomas11 is not online. LouisThomas11
Joined: 14 Dec 2011
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04 Jun 2013 06:05 PM
#bullybella72002
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Rubicund is not online. Rubicund
Joined: 08 May 2013
Total Posts: 117
04 Jun 2013 06:42 PM
Honestly, ROBLOX is not the place to post this. It's great. But it's not gonna stop. It might just bring in more bullies.

~Sketch~
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sweety67888 is not online. sweety67888
Joined: 04 Jan 2013
Total Posts: 8
05 Jun 2013 10:40 AM
Hey stop,

People stop some one worked hard on this ad least like it





I give it....

10/10
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Blackglow is not online. Blackglow
Joined: 18 Feb 2012
Total Posts: 4
05 Jun 2013 10:49 AM
You should put music behind it.
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BookLover1031 is not online. BookLover1031
Joined: 22 Nov 2012
Total Posts: 1
05 Jun 2013 11:45 AM
It's a very touching song. 10/10
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vladski is not online. vladski
Joined: 01 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 9554
05 Jun 2013 12:47 PM
This sucks

"IT'S NO USE"
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ThatsMyChair is not online. ThatsMyChair
Joined: 03 Jul 2011
Total Posts: 1723
05 Jun 2013 12:57 PM
6/10
Should be like a metalcore/hardcore punk song
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alexthebloxer is not online. alexthebloxer
Joined: 15 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 736
05 Jun 2013 01:40 PM
2/10 it smelled of metalcore and edginess
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Superyoshiman12 is not online. Superyoshiman12
Joined: 26 Mar 2013
Total Posts: 3109
05 Jun 2013 01:55 PM
How to stop bullies

Bring a gun to school
Bullies cant win verus AN -94
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McFloaty is not online. McFloaty
Joined: 28 May 2013
Total Posts: 280
05 Jun 2013 01:55 PM
I can feel the message behind this, but the lyrics are an entirely different story.
\ 1/10 \
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bella72002 is not online. bella72002
Joined: 11 Aug 2012
Total Posts: 103
05 Jun 2013 02:15 PM
Louis, Its ROBLOX, not Twitter.
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violetcries is not online. violetcries
Joined: 27 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 6117
05 Jun 2013 02:30 PM
"@violetcries Well, they are bullying you and you want it to stop, if they were your friend they would stop, right? You picking up what I'm putting down? But anyways, a few girls used to be mean to me and a few friends and now were all friends. Its like forgive and forget."

Sorry it's a day late, but what you said is stupid. If they were your friend they wouldn't necessarily stop. Stop getting bullied by standing up for yourself instead making things easier for yourself because the easy way out isn't the best way out.
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McFloaty is not online. McFloaty
Joined: 28 May 2013
Total Posts: 280
05 Jun 2013 02:44 PM
Super, true, but it's also a fast way to be placed in jail.
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oucho is not online. oucho
Joined: 01 Dec 2008
Total Posts: 511
05 Jun 2013 02:48 PM
Eh, couldn't care less about this song.
Didn't even read it, is it about stopping bullying? If so, just no.
A few words wont stop it.
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Jordan39 is not online. Jordan39
Joined: 23 Jun 2008
Total Posts: 1241
05 Jun 2013 02:51 PM
~Writes a song about putting an end to bullying, but even those who are bullied on a regular basis dislikes the song~

>> Bad lyrics bella.
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