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| 15 Jan 2013 06:18 PM |
Hey guys, this is another story made by me. Can't stop making them for some reason. Here we go!
Chapter 1: Prologue
One day at school of robloxia, guest was walking down the hall. When a bully comes up to him and slams him into the locker. "OW! WHAAA!" "SHUT UP, AND STAY DOWN!!!" The bully yelled back. And beat him up. Guest coughed out blood, and passed out.
*The next day*
Guest was walking down that same hall, but a different bully comes up to him, and stole his clothes, and spanked him. "OW! WHAAAAA!" "Shut up!" The bully said just like the last time. But this time, the teacher called him, and he got expelled.
But, however. The teacher couldn't find his clothes. So she just drove guest home.
When guest got home, he cried as he ran to his room while the teacher explains to his mom what happened.
"I HATE BULLIES! WHAAAAA"
It was like this everyday for guest. Someone would beat him up, and nearly kill him. Recently, he learned about suicide. And he is thinking that it is a good idea. But then again, gltiches in roblox make it so that if he dies or resets, or commits suicide somehow, he will NEVER respawn. Unless you're some kind of elite hacker.
So guest flopped onto his bed, and cried. However, he had no idea what adventures, fun and sad, lays ahead of him. Filled with bullies, love, luck, happiness, anything could happen in the world of ROBLOX.
TO BE CONTINUED! |
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Quasar99
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| 15 Jan 2013 06:40 PM |
pretty good. i like it
"Fire is the leading cause of fire." - Dr. Doofenshmirtz |
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| 17 Jan 2013 07:47 PM |
The wheels on the bus go bump and bump!
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| 17 Jan 2013 08:04 PM |
Chapter 2: Another chapter
Guest went out of his room. He may as well. He cant hide in his room forever.
Only to find SHEDLETSKY/TELAMON WITH A BAWNHAMMAH!
Nah, just pulling your leg. It was his mom. Only, she had a knife. "I cant take you anymore guest. I have to kill you." "WHAAAAA NOOO!" Guest begged. "TOO LATE!" Guests mom took a swing at him, but he ducked, and hit his mom in the face, making her drop the knife. Guest picked the knife up, and ran away.
Too bad that guest forgot everything he had a home. Food. Water. Shelter. Clothes. (Well, he didn't need that part anyway)
When he was far from home, he sat down and cried, and held his best friend.
His hat. Guest got his hat when he first joined roblox and was just a baby guest. He loved it at first sight. He could just remember when he got home for the first time...
*Flashback*
Guest was put down on the floor.
"Lil'guesty, I have a present for you!" His mom said and gave him his hat Guest sniffed it. (Cute! back then, guest was only the size of the clone potion, only 1 inch bigger.) Guest fell inlove with it right away, and learned to put it on. If he ever was separated from it, he would kill himself after crying for 4 days. When his mom had to wash it, he would try to climb into the washing machine with it. But his mom would stop him, and hold him back while he cried.
Guest realized that he needed his mom more than ever.
"Why did my mommy try to kill me? I mean, she loved me. Unless she was forced to do it. Bu-" Guest realized it. He was already running back to his house.
But by the time he got back, his mom had already been shot by the bullies.
TO BE CONTINUED! |
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| 20 Jan 2013 04:22 PM |
Chapter 3:
Guest was staring through the windows, trying his best not to be caught.
Ever since 2014, roblox had a glitch. If your killed, you get banned, and sent to banland...............
He heard the bullies conversation.
"Ha. That dumb guest is gonna cry and kill himself when he sees this!" One of them said. "Yeah. I sure wish to see him. Oh look, 1000000 rbux! Let's take it!"
That was the last straw....
Guest came in with the knife. And tried to stab the bullies, but he just was horrible at fighting...
"Guest!? What are you do-"
Guest already stabbed him.
"OW! Ohhh that hurts! I got a bruise" Poor guest XD
TO BE CONTINUED! :D |
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Tokolur
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| 20 Jan 2013 04:37 PM |
| @quasar99: I love phineas and ferb! |
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Recesity
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| 20 Jan 2013 05:05 PM |
| This was really kind of sort of, uh how do I say this politely? Terrible? Awful? A waste of time? Bad? Yeah. Bad, this story is bad. |
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| 21 Jan 2013 05:39 PM |
| Just because a top 100 poster is on here, doesn't mean he has to be a jerk :/. I mean, if he hates it, don't read it. Its simple as that. |
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| 21 Jan 2013 05:42 PM |
WARNING:
This is a sad story. I do not mean to insult people who like guests. If you like stories with guests having fun all the time, DONT READ!
(A bit too late, eh? XD |
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| 27 May 2013 06:32 PM |
| Eh. I'm really enjoying it so far. |
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| 27 May 2013 06:36 PM |
Why DO YOU talk (lol) like this when writing a story...!!!
its like the exact polar opposite of how you're supposed to write prose
outside talking with friends and such on the internet.
~gottamgottamgottamgottamgottamdesugottamgottamgottamgottamgottamgottamgottam ~ |
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| 27 May 2013 06:39 PM |
"If you hate it, don't read it."
YOUR LOGIC IS UNCANNY.
"This is a sad story."
Yes, it is. This story is so sad. Very sad. |
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| 27 May 2013 06:47 PM |
Chapter 3
"Now, you're gonna die with your filthy, dumb, mother ya dumb guest!" One of the bullies said. He got out a knife.
Guest tried to think "Its only a dream" He kept on saying. He was suddenly thinking about another memory as a baby guest.
Guest was crawling around in the kitchen. He saw a fridge. ":)" Guest made a face. He tried to open the fridge, but all of a sudden, it swung hard and hit him. "WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Guest cried. "OH MY GOD GUESTY IM SORRY!" His mom brought him an icebag. She had accidently hit him while opening the fridge.
Guest stopped thinking about it. He hated these bullies, and wasn't going to let them bully him anymore. He punched the one with the gun, and took the gun. He shot one of the bullies. He tried to aim for another one, but he was outnumbered. The bullies were on top of him, and cut open his chest. They took one organ out, one by one. Until he died.
Guest woke up with a snap. It was all just a dream. His mother wasn't gone. But he still is a victim to bullies.
TO BE CONTINUED |
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powser51
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| 27 May 2013 07:24 PM |
So this is a story about a guest and his mom (?) getting killed and tortured by bullies.
Why the heck would a guest have that dream.
And why did a bully strip him?
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| 13 Jun 2013 07:27 PM |
Chapter 5: How this all is going to begin (Hard to think of chapter names, no name them something ridiculous like the famous authors use :P)
Guest got out of bed, put some clothes on, and walked out into the kitchen to smell that his mom made him breakfast. "Guesty, how was your sleep?" Guest's mom asked. "I HAD I NIGHTMARE WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" Guest screamed. They enjoyed their breakfast, and guest got on the bus, so far so good. Only 4 paper airplanes hit his face in a minute. "HA! LOSER! GUEST IS A LOSER!" The kids screamed. They punched him and slapped and kicked him over and over. Guest cried and the busdriver didn't even care at all. So he tried to hit back, but missed. They only got out a stick and swapped him in the eye.
When they got to school, guest ran as fast as he could down the hallway. Crying. He was trying to avoid the bullies, but all of a sudden, a bully step up and grabbed him.
"YOU IDIOT!" He yelled right into his face, "YOU GOT MY FRIEND EXPELLED!" He started punching guest until guest was bleeding. He spun and threw guest into the wall and he fell through it. Guest blacked out..........
When guest woke up inside of the wall, it was all dark. He felt dizzy. He stood up, and walked out of the hole that was made when he was thrown through the wall. He fell over and blacked out again for 4 minutes.
When he woke up, it was even darker outside. He went to the back exit,
It was locked....
TO BE CONTINUED |
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jackson61
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| 13 Jun 2013 07:58 PM |
| Please stop with these stories, not because I'm a guest lover, but because these stories are extremely bad. |
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| 13 Jun 2013 08:08 PM |
| Why did a bully strip him? |
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