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Re: "Open Books" Ft. DinoDude1235 (Comment feedback)

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altar30 is not online. altar30
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10 Jun 2013 01:23 PM
[Altar30/Radical]
I'm surrounded by acquaintance but no one i can actually call my friend,
I don't need them anyways, i'm just waiting for the day i blow up and ascend,
Into the future I've been working so hard to defend,
From everyone shooting down my idea's before i can even try
I wrote a letter to god and Still waiting for his reply,
But one thing for sure is giving up hope is something i will never deny.
I've witnessed in the last week a birth and a fake father come aboard,
A death of a loved one and a child ignored,
Another soul born into a family that can barely afford,
Life for themselves so this one is abandoned.
The goosebumps she gave me are gone,
Everything i thought about us were wrong,
And now i have no reason to carry on,
But I'm not ready to end everything I've worked so hard on...no...heck no!
I'm gonna be a legend or in my life find some balance,
A couple billion in the world, only takes one to make a difference,
With something as simple as a smile to a kid with no guidance,
I go by Radical but that doesn't make me the word of defiance,
I just want everyone to relieve there pressure before there silenced,
Forever....

[DinoDude1235]
Now stable is disallowed,
Big shake to make daddy proud,
Wanna see his smile when he see's this vinyl.
On top of my dreams is where I'm found,
Earlier I thought I was the rebound,
Now marching to my own sound.
Listen to traveling Pat, cover the grounding map.
Baby Im staying but it's weird know what I've done,
Listen to the young man play his drums,
Rocking and shaking at all those thumbs.
Boy he was timid, now I'm in the zone, seein' things so vivid.
And the devil in a hot pink dress tryin' ask me for one dance.
Can't pick on or off, Taking the chances with one more plant
Some take chances saying I can't
So I say "You're not my critic"
It's my life so I'll live it, you should go [F] it
Standing up, yeah I love it
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hjames9911 is not online. hjames9911
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10 Jun 2013 01:26 PM
7/10
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PearTime is not online. PearTime
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10 Jun 2013 01:27 PM
8/10
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XxdeathkeepxX is not online. XxdeathkeepxX
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10 Jun 2013 01:39 PM
Cool
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jaylenjohnson2 is not online. jaylenjohnson2
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10 Jun 2013 01:43 PM
Nice song. 10/10
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skyskeeter is not online. skyskeeter
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10 Jun 2013 01:44 PM
Dope.
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james1128 is not online. james1128
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10 Jun 2013 02:01 PM
Dayummm this go hard. keep it up. im a huge fan inspired by you ;3
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lila47 is not online. lila47
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10 Jun 2013 02:03 PM
This was a let down for me, 6-7/10
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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10 Jun 2013 02:07 PM
How so?
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lila47 is not online. lila47
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10 Jun 2013 02:09 PM
It's all random and about yourself. I just don't see why you'd write about yourself and not the things you go through/see/hear
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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10 Jun 2013 02:12 PM
I would answer that but it's kinda personal :/
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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10 Jun 2013 02:13 PM
I totally feel you though, not what I usually do, but im trying to branch off into other forms of expressing myself
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lila47 is not online. lila47
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10 Jun 2013 02:16 PM
Try using "radical" and other signs that only you can relate too.

~luv you
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LilRac is not online. LilRac
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10 Jun 2013 02:20 PM
Rad-I-Cal! #RadicalForPresident. That was tha bomb Altar!

You won't believe how fast I rapped Dino's verse!
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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10 Jun 2013 02:22 PM
Daww thanx Rac :3
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kekeswag is not online. kekeswag
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10 Jun 2013 02:37 PM
wow this dope af.. big props guys, hope we can collab soon
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gromo1311 is not online. gromo1311
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10 Jun 2013 03:16 PM
Thanks altar, for restoring ro-rapping to where it belongs it. <3
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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10 Jun 2013 04:42 PM
^ All in a days work
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ducky980 is not online. ducky980
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10 Jun 2013 04:45 PM
YOu've done nothing in restoring, this is disappointed from you :(. 6/10
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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10 Jun 2013 05:01 PM
How can i improve Duckster?
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HadesWorrior is not online. HadesWorrior
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10 Jun 2013 05:27 PM
Dope 9/10.
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Crazynoobkiller431 is not online. Crazynoobkiller431
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10 Jun 2013 09:44 PM
I like it. c:

9.9/10
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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11 Jun 2013 12:08 PM
bamp, How can i improve in any way?!?!?
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kumill123456 is not online. kumill123456
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18 Jun 2013 02:05 AM
Awesome Song! Keep up the Great work!
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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18 Jun 2013 04:12 PM
^ Thanks. I particulary feel like i haven't evolved too much, but this is a start
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