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| 10 Jun 2013 04:40 PM |
[Narrator: Tallconor Faction: WIJ] [Vaktovian: Barry1234 ] [Setting: Vaktovian Mine Sector?]
As I rush around the corner my eyes lock on his. I can see the metallic outline of his rusted gas mask through the pale moonlight. His eyes are a blazing dark red. He's a Vaktovian. [As Tallconor stumbles back the Vaktovian lunges forward, crazed for revenge of the WIJ Crusade (WIJ-VAK). Tallconor falls down with a loud thud. Now sprawled on the ground and at gun point.]
He puts the barrel of the StA-52 to my mouth and stands forward and he grabs my face and punches me hard, his fist connecting to my nose. Blood trickles down my nose in a steady stream. Wrapping his arms around me with a knife in his left hand, he pulls me towards him (I can feel the bulge of his seam). His body weight crushing me, and I itch to push him off but I can't, my arms, useless pinned to my side.
And that is part one of my story.
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:45 PM |
No thoughts?
I think title should be changed to Strange Encounter |
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:54 PM |
| Part 2 might be posted on an alt.. |
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:54 PM |
dont risk it on your main
i got my alt banned
by ty for making tall main character |
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:55 PM |
sounds like a man trying to.. with.. another.. uhh.. yeah |
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Smooks12
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:55 PM |
| Make part 2 longer. It literally took me 15 seconds to read it all. |
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CapRex213
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:57 PM |
how can you feel the AHEM when we vaktovians wear non-bendy power armour
p p p p plot twist |
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:58 PM |
Oh part two will be long
very long |
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CapRex213
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| 10 Jun 2013 04:59 PM |
"part two will be long
very long"
i understood that joke |
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| 10 Jun 2013 05:00 PM |
See the Royal Spy Master was in his formal attire.
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| 10 Jun 2013 05:25 PM |
| Part two is coming out tomorrow :D |
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| 18 Jun 2013 08:43 PM |
| Part two got my alt banned. |
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| 18 Jun 2013 08:45 PM |
| It should have been named 50 shades of indigo |
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| 18 Jun 2013 08:45 PM |
i didnt see it
repost it on another alt |
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| 18 Jun 2013 08:48 PM |
| I will I'm going to rewrite some stuff. |
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kingnuman
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| 18 Jun 2013 08:49 PM |
this isn't as funny as 50 Shades of WIJ
-Irish, quality without compromise- |
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| 18 Jun 2013 08:58 PM |
| Okay title change and part two should be out in less than two hours on my alt. |
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