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nick6457 is not online. nick6457
Joined: 26 Jul 2011
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10 Jun 2013 06:14 AM
So this is Chapter 2 for my LS Story. You can read Chapter 1 here: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=100726636



Like the first chapter it will jump between third person and first person through "Parts".
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Chapter 2
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-PART 1-

I looked in Shawnbros' reassuring eyes and he picked me up from the ground. As I told him the events of the previous hours, he was nothing but shocked. The Emperor being killed would throw LS into a state of corruption and madness, and I'm sure he is thinking the exact same thing.

He speaks softly to me, "It's ok... I know you would have died if you fought him".

He could tell that was on my mind by the way I was acting.

"I could have done more",' I manage to choke out through my reoccurring sobs.

He holds me tight and I feel warm, even comfortable, inside his arms. As I return the hug, I am able to suppress my sobs easier now. My breathing is calmed, and I realize it is time to start acting. There is no point to sit around and let more lives be loss. As we let go, we both agree to formulate a new tactic. We leave the small meeting compound and rally the remaining soldiers since the last JC raid. We are able to count at least 1200. Small it is, it will have to do.

"Everyone, soldiers, you have risked your lives for us, for this empire. And now I, shall risk my life for yours", I begin my speech.
"We have fought for days end, and fatigue has overcome us all, but at a stressful and horrible time like this, hope is all we can grasp upon! Hope has being us all this way, and hope will bring us out. But not hope alone. It is aided by the bravery, and valor of every single of you. Today is not the day to despair, but the day to fight! To respond to these horrible attacks, these horrible people! Today we march! Today we will finally achieve the liberty we have been fighting for months!" I end the speech.

As the soldiers roar in approval, Shawnbros notes how I cannot fight myself. I, being too fragile and valuable to be risked on the fields of battle.

"Empress, you fighting, is a death sentence awaiting you. You know yourself. I admire the bravery you show, but I cannot let you risk you're life", he tells me respectfully.

"Who says it is even your decision to let me fight", I return the statement.

"It's not my decision, but it's for the sake of you. Empress, I would never let you die. Not even for me", replies Shawnbros with a hint of melancholy in his voice.

For a moment, I picture him as Darkggod, saying the same things to me, but dying only moments later. I imagine the same demise that might arrive upon Shawnbros, but I get that thought out of my head immediately. This love life that has been going between me and Shawnbros is affecting everything. Including me. The feelings I have for him are too great to conceal...

When the solders are told to march on, quickly, and passionately, do I kiss him on the lips. And for a moment, we are one. Equals, as if we were married. Though, the moment is as gone as it has become. I draw my lips back and walk into battle. Knowing what awaits me can be life or death. The death of me or a thousand others.
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Story going pretty good eh? That last part had me going crazy with excitement. So I'm changing it up a bit. Part 2 is going to be told in Shawnbros perspective. And it's also going to be first person. Also, the mountain in here is NOT steep. it is more like a hill, one that you can easily climb up, but it is big enough to be a mountain. So here goes.
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-PART 2-

I felt life coming back to me. The revival of myself when she kissed me. It was majestic, as if we were in a land of nothingness. And we were the only ones there. For that short moment, we were alone. Off in our own world, but then reality soon came back. Realizing she had just led the army to march off to JC's capital, I knew something was wrong instantly. It was quiet, no sound of distant JC armies marching, or even the sounds from distant outposts. I saw then what might be my death. Hundreds of arches, lined up on mountains.

Before I could tell the others, it was too late. I saw the arrows rain down. I saw our men drop, and I instantly went and grabbed the Empress under my shields. Others did the same and we still had a good 700 men. When the arrows finally stopped, we charged. I led the men up the mountain and we quickly killed off the archers. That couldn't be it. And I was right. All my life fighting as a soldier, and most of it was fighting JC, I known them to be tricky, and decisive. This was all a trap. We were pinned up like pigs for slaughter. JC's troops ran up the small mountain and surrounded us in a matter of minutes. I saw the army line up, as if an Official was coming through. And there was one coming through. It was nobody other than Pspjohn, the invader.

I felt a tinge of fear, but extinguished it.

"What do you want, I screamed at him in a menacing voice.

He only chuckles silently and looks at the Empress, IBurning. I knew then what he desired. He did this, because he only wanted her... I unsheathed my sword and stepped in right of the Empress.

"You will have to kill me to get to her! I stand my ground, and I will slay every last of you if you dare lay a hand on her!", I shout in a furious rage.

The chuckle Pspjohn gives is even more mocking than the first. He pulls out his sword and says, "Then I challenge you to a duel. A duel to the death".

I knew this would be my only chance to protect her, so I agreed. As we took our places, we began. I quickly aim for his legs. But I saw my flaw in that plan. While trying to trip him with my sword, I left my entire upper body uncovered and he took his chance. I felt the sword slash through my metal armor and blood started to seep through the wound. I was weakened, but my morale was even higher than before. He managed to get a few more blows into me before I got my first hit on him. I managed to slide my sword over his arm, not cutting it off completely, but making a deep wound. I arrogantly laugh, and do the same with his other arm. I cut him in the chest and he starts to hunch a bit. Through all my mocking an arrogance, I was becoming too foolish. I fought like I already won the battle and that was my second mistake so far. I would have never done it if I known it was my last. He brung up his sword high and slashed at my chest, not effectively killing me, but giving me a horrible enough wound to allow me to bleed to death. As I fall on the ground and my sword stumbles out of my hand, I hear the Empress screaming. The words that processed through my mind was...

"No!... I loved him!"
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Another cliff-hanging drama part or what? The reason I'm making it in Chapter's because I won't be able to get everything done at once. It's almost breakfast, so I'll get to work on a third Chapter after I eat. So, are you liking it so far? I need to know which directions to go in, because this Chapter was a bit dull. Overall though, this one might be better than the first. Anyway, there would be at least one or two more chapters to conclude this book. Make sure to check your messages for the rest!
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hery192 is online. hery192
Joined: 04 Aug 2010
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10 Jun 2013 06:16 AM
back in chapter one

" Horrible it was, her entire family was killed by JC's brutes, the Knights of Valor. "

why me
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nick6457 is not online. nick6457
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10 Jun 2013 06:17 AM
Lol, sorry. I saw there was a Knights of Valor group so I jumped on it.
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samblue234567 is not online. samblue234567
Joined: 07 Apr 2012
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10 Jun 2013 06:18 AM
How did you write this so quickly, though still so well?

» Sleet Clan: Warlord
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nick6457 is not online. nick6457
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10 Jun 2013 06:19 AM
Well, I actually write as a hobby. And the ideas flowed so quickly I had to type faster so I wouldn't lose them.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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10 Jun 2013 06:23 AM
lots of drama.

yes, this is gonna get messy

- Vɪᴄᴋʏ Sᴛʏʟᴇ -
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nick6457 is not online. nick6457
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10 Jun 2013 06:25 AM
I'm trying to make more Drama, so the story still stays "fresh". After reading lots of books, I learned some writers do that to keep readers, reading. Chapter 3 will most likely be the longest and take the most time to make.
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victoria621 is not online. victoria621
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10 Jun 2013 06:25 AM
keep it up.

- Vɪᴄᴋʏ Sᴛʏʟᴇ -
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Distances is not online. Distances
Joined: 04 Jun 2012
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10 Jun 2013 06:32 AM
Okay.
So Eric was killed off.
Shawn was killed off.

>>>------> [ x_x ]

^ I got john.

-Hail the LS Empress! Hail me!-
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hery192 is online. hery192
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10 Jun 2013 06:33 AM
no
john is mine
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ultimateexoivper is not online. ultimateexoivper
Joined: 13 Aug 2011
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10 Jun 2013 06:39 AM
This is like the hunger games a bit!
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godzilla4124 is not online. godzilla4124
Joined: 15 Mar 2009
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10 Jun 2013 06:39 AM
Iburning is next...
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Alch3mIx is not online. Alch3mIx
Joined: 03 Apr 2013
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10 Jun 2013 06:43 AM
Omg I think this is gonna be a long series FTW!
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Alch3mIx is not online. Alch3mIx
Joined: 03 Apr 2013
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10 Jun 2013 06:44 AM
As a Royal Guard i'm included **HEIL LS!**

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hery192 is online. hery192
Joined: 04 Aug 2010
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10 Jun 2013 06:45 AM
that means you got killed
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Alch3mIx is not online. Alch3mIx
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10 Jun 2013 06:46 AM
Omg i was too late darkg got killed..I was there still fighting on other JC's on JC central then I got bored after **killing Half of them** FTW!!!
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Alch3mIx is not online. Alch3mIx
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10 Jun 2013 06:47 AM
Not yet dood ;3
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Alch3mIx is not online. Alch3mIx
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10 Jun 2013 06:48 AM
Add me pl0x
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hery192 is online. hery192
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10 Jun 2013 06:49 AM
No you did die. It says that all of the guards were either killed or captured
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Alch3mIx is not online. Alch3mIx
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10 Jun 2013 06:52 AM
Aaaaaaaand I escaped and killed thousands of them, **~Nubcaiks taste better with *psp* toppings~**
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TomGreenIV is not online. TomGreenIV
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10 Jun 2013 10:07 AM
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darkggod is not online. darkggod
Joined: 04 Feb 2011
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10 Jun 2013 04:39 PM
This is entertainment only, as I'd never die to the likes of a snake, HAH. I'd take out all of them before one of them touching me. As for LS loosing to them, the first time was messed up, but as I stated a while ago. It would never happen again.

Just saying..


~LS Emperor Darkggod~
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TheLittleGoomba is not online. TheLittleGoomba
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10 Jun 2013 04:40 PM
You should've just made this drama story about iBurning and Dark's ods.
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
Joined: 27 Oct 2010
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10 Jun 2013 04:41 PM
"Empress, you fighting, is a death sentence awaiting you."

No offense but you basically called her a bad fighter
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Vysq is not online. Vysq
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10 Jun 2013 04:44 PM
JC >
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