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| 06 Jun 2013 07:57 PM |
Story: Are they zombies? Are they going to hurt me? The year is 2022, A war between The most powerful country's started. China, Russia, And America. This all started in year 2/2/22 Well. That's the day the world ended. Disaster struck! China and Russia have been secretly working together for about 19 years. Russia made bombs for China, and China used them, leaving all the weight on their shoulders. When this war started, Russia and China created the most powerful bomb know of. It was full of chemicals, drugs, and poison. 4 bombs were dropped in each state, killing over 6000 people per state. But were they dead? Really dead? No. They were being morphed together, creating monsters. Heads on arms, legs on necks. It was terrifying. They were told to bite, taking more parts, and eating them. And remember, the drugs and poisons are still in the air. Health could be very important to you.
Goal: Surviving. Fill out this list, and I will accept it or decline it. Name:(FULL NAME) Age:(10-80) Nationality: Height, weight, appearance: Bio: (Please tell back story, And job) State of health: ( Hard breathing, Angry, Scared, terrified, Normal, morphing, etc) Were you will start your role-playing: (Please choose from the 4, New York, New Jersey, Kansas, Atlanta) Personality:(Easy to anger, sweet, mean, sarcastic, etc) Weapons: ( Dont choose "Shotgun" Or anything like that, Start with something simple. Pistol, Crowbar, swords, etc) Inventory:( No tents, or jumbles of food.)
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| 06 Jun 2013 08:07 PM |
| You're not part of the grammar police. |
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elfxninja
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| 06 Jun 2013 08:32 PM |
" This all started in year 2/2/22 Well." It would be either "on February second, two thousand twenty two", or " in the year 2022". |
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| 06 Jun 2013 08:36 PM |
You're not supposed to use a space after a speech mark.
GRAMMAR POLICE! |
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| 06 Jun 2013 08:38 PM |
| Everybody makes mistakes. Is it really such a big deal? |
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elfxninja
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| 06 Jun 2013 08:41 PM |
I am not being the grammar police, as that is not my job. But apparently it's her job. Pretty good job on the RP though, 7/10. |
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| 06 Jun 2013 08:42 PM |
| Yes, thank you. But no one seems to be participating in it. |
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