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| 05 Jun 2013 04:26 PM |
| hi this is a thread where you pretend to date transgender members of the Smiths :) |
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| 05 Jun 2013 04:31 PM |
| Do we get to end up on the Jerry Springer show?! :D |
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| 05 Jun 2013 04:36 PM |
Morrissey descended the spiral staircase of the observatory. The sun illuminated her eyes, which in turn reflected the entire world with gentle breezes rolling in through open windows on the ground floor lifted her perfume all about, awing and mesmerising my two abyssal nostrils. Her long brown hair swayed with each step and each time nearly came to a rest upon the bosoms concealed in her schooldays dress that I often sit and admire in solitude. What a beauty I often wish Plato contemplated complexity more akin to this; the tame essence of Wilde had no idea what he was giving up. Shakespeare needed an Anne that hath more a way, I say.
I offered my arm to her upon her reaching the end of the stairs. She locked her arms around me and clung and snuggled right up. Gabardine - her absolute favorite. Her soft hair too soft for me. I smiled to myself, the warmth was intoxicating I was inebriated on beauty. I escorted her to the door and opened it for her. How sailors make it on there on the seas I do not rightly know. I best stay a poet, for however long this remains a profession. Must right to dear Poe about my luck.
why did i type that oh god lol |
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| 05 Jun 2013 05:00 PM |
| step away and reflect on what you've just done |
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| 05 Jun 2013 05:01 PM |
"step away and reflect on what you've just done"
i've just romanticised myself with morrissey to a joycean tune oh god is this good or ba dom gihhhhhhhhhhh |
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| 05 Jun 2013 05:03 PM |
| you were in a castle by the sea, I suppose? |
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| 05 Jun 2013 05:03 PM |
I noticed a grammatical error.
You see, after a period, you put "Her soft hair too soft for me."
That sentence is lacking a preposition. If you want the structure to remain the same, you'd have to change that period before it into a comma. |
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| 05 Jun 2013 05:04 PM |
"That sentence is lacking a preposition. If you want the structure to remain the same, you'd have to change that period before it into a comma."
fully intentional the piece was modeled after the work of james joyce so i mean |
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| 05 Jun 2013 05:06 PM |
| ZIRCON IVE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU FOR 2 DAYS OMG HI!! |
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