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| 04 Jun 2013 03:11 PM |
Don't judge me..
Hurting In The Past Its like I don't have feelings. Am I not alive. Its like your not afraid to hurt me Cause it works every time you try I'm losing my voice now From all the crying I did And you don't even know me Its like I'm just some little kid
Everyone says to ignore you But its really hard Its kind of impossible To always be on guard Everyone says it will end soon But they don't know how long it will last When all of it ends, Ill still be broken From the hurting in the past Hurting in the past...
Ill never forget All the harsh things you said Nothing can remove the words You left in my head And I hope you listen to the words I sing And I hope you know that To stop all the hurting and for us to be friends, I would give everything
Everyone says to ignore you But its really hard Its kind of impossible To always be on guard Everyone says it will end soon But they don't know how long it will last When all of it ends, Ill still be broken From the hurting in the past Hurting in the past...
I just want to remind you That the words I sing Are very true And don't forget the happy memories We had When we were friends...
Everyone says to ignore you... But its getting really hard... Because its basically impossible... To always be on guard... Yeah. Everyone says to ignore you But its really hard Its kind of impossible To always be on guard Everyone says it will end soon But they don't know how long it will last When all of it ends, Ill still be broken From the hurting in the past Hurting in the past...
Its like I don't have feelings. Am I not alive. Its like your not afraid to hurt me Cause it works every time...
Pleaseeeeee rate out of 10... if its bad, tell me because I don't want to waste my life writing bad songs. xD So yeah. You probably got here from my blurb xP |
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| 04 Jun 2013 04:55 PM |
| It's more of a poem than a song. I do write songs, and I am renowned for poems and I would honestly say what you wrote is very Cliché. It has to be said, not only is the grammar atrocious, but what exactly is in this I don't know about already? If I were you, I wouldn't really try to pursue this aspect of life. |
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| 04 Jun 2013 04:58 PM |
| 1/10 sorry, I can relate to it though but the friend thing, you would want someone who bullies you to be your friend. |
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| 04 Jun 2013 05:01 PM |
| that was touching i rate it 10/10 |
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| 04 Jun 2013 05:23 PM |
*wrote
get out you will be bullied more on here |
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johnb
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| 04 Jun 2013 05:50 PM |
| Bullying will stop if we bust out the knives bro |
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| 04 Jun 2013 06:01 PM |
Okay. So many people I have to reply to in this one message. Yay. -_-
@iwantmykfc Stop what...
@toxicdude82 Sorry, but I didn't understand half of what you said. But for one, the grammar wasn't totally trash. And two, well, the punctuation on my laptop when I wrote the song was all weird. Most of it when you pressed it was accented E's. The grammar I had was from autocorrect. But I could put in periods.
@violetcries Well, they are bullying you and you want it to stop, if they were your friend they would stop, right? You picking up what I'm putting down? But anyways, a few girls used to be mean to me and a few friends and now were all friends. Its like forgive and forget.
@LouisThomas11 What the heck...
@slendermanroadkill Thank you sooo much! :D
@Shadybrute All that I'm trying to do is to see if people think my song is good. ANd you are helping the people who are bullying me. And its called a typo, you twit.
@jaylenjohnson2 Well, I know it won't, but being bullied yourself can stop.
Well, many things I would like to say. First, I write a song about being bullied, and only 1 person says its good. Yeah. Second, I'm only 11, do you honestly think I could write a hit album... haha, no. Third, I wrote this in about 15 minutes. I didn't do my best. Fourth, this wasn't even related to a real experience. Even though I can relate, I randomly wrote this song, cause what I can relate to is over now. Fifth, This was really hard, trying to write a sad sad song when I'm a HAPPY HAPPY girl :D So, next time, I will write a happy, up-beat song. And last but not least, Sixth, I know I said to be honest and give me your opinion, but some of these comments hurt my feelings, so lets all lie to Bella and tell her she did good :D |
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Rubicund
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| 04 Jun 2013 06:42 PM |
Honestly, ROBLOX is not the place to post this. It's great. But it's not gonna stop. It might just bring in more bullies.
~Sketch~ |
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| 05 Jun 2013 10:40 AM |
Hey stop,
People stop some one worked hard on this ad least like it
I give it....
10/10 |
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| 05 Jun 2013 10:49 AM |
| You should put music behind it. |
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| 05 Jun 2013 11:45 AM |
It's a very touching song. 10/10
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| 05 Jun 2013 12:57 PM |
6/10 Should be like a metalcore/hardcore punk song |
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| 05 Jun 2013 01:40 PM |
| 2/10 it smelled of metalcore and edginess |
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| 05 Jun 2013 01:55 PM |
How to stop bullies
Bring a gun to school Bullies cant win verus AN -94 |
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McFloaty
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| 05 Jun 2013 01:55 PM |
I can feel the message behind this, but the lyrics are an entirely different story. \ 1/10 \ |
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| 05 Jun 2013 02:15 PM |
| Louis, Its ROBLOX, not Twitter. |
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| 05 Jun 2013 02:30 PM |
"@violetcries Well, they are bullying you and you want it to stop, if they were your friend they would stop, right? You picking up what I'm putting down? But anyways, a few girls used to be mean to me and a few friends and now were all friends. Its like forgive and forget."
Sorry it's a day late, but what you said is stupid. If they were your friend they wouldn't necessarily stop. Stop getting bullied by standing up for yourself instead making things easier for yourself because the easy way out isn't the best way out. |
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McFloaty
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| 05 Jun 2013 02:44 PM |
| Super, true, but it's also a fast way to be placed in jail. |
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oucho
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| 05 Jun 2013 02:48 PM |
Eh, couldn't care less about this song. Didn't even read it, is it about stopping bullying? If so, just no. A few words wont stop it.
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| 05 Jun 2013 02:51 PM |
~Writes a song about putting an end to bullying, but even those who are bullied on a regular basis dislikes the song~
>> Bad lyrics bella. |
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