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| 02 Jun 2013 08:46 PM |
Another one of my stories I will be writing. I'm expecting it to have a couple of chapters, maybe 5 or 6. We'll have to see. :) ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [CHAPTER 1]
A grand meeting was being held at Conventus Hall between all of the High Ranking staff. A storm was brewing. "Five of our high ranks have died in the past couple of weeks. And, this isn't no coincidence, as we are being attacked on a weekly basis by hostile intruders. We may not know who these intruders are, but, they leave a path of destruction behind them" said MoolegoTheCow as he slammed his fist on the table. "If we need to stop this we need to find out who is behind all these attacks" exclaimed Dmoney433. "Another question is, who invited us to this meeting, especially on such a short notice?" The room grew silent. No one seemed to know who invited everyone to the meeting. "If you wanted to kill all of the high ranks, you would want them in an enclosed space, so you can do as much damage as possible." said sami246. Then, a grenade was tossed through an open window. "Get down!" shouted cj10127. Everyone ducked for cover as the grenade went off. Screams of agonizing pain filled the room. High ranks slowly got out from under the table, and the causalities were horrible. Fireandicebattle, shinypikachu1234, trooper502 ,and fabiao14 were screaming in pain. All the other high ranks had minor injuries. "Someone get med evac here, NOW!" shouted Moolego. Blobmista4 called for the med evacs, and explained the situation.
"Venezias a nice place, isn't it?" I asked Skyman772. "Definitely. It's gorgeous, I'll tell you that." he replied. We walked up the stairs to Andrew204's office, and into the lobby. The lobby was lit with artificial candles, which seemed to give a grey glow to the room. "I scheduled an appointment with Andrew about the FEAR and RAT alliance" I said. "Oh yes. You can take a seat. You'll be called when ready." replied the Private working at the desk. Sky and I took a seat by a very strange plant, and started to discuss some new allies. "I was thinking TGI, but, they might not exactly like us" I told Sky. "Well, you never know til you try it out." replied Sky.
"PointlessChris24, Andrew is ready for you." Sky and I got up and walked to the door leading to Andrew's office. Greco-Roman columns lined the left and right walls, as well as statues dating back to ancient times."Andrew! How have things been?" I exclaimed as I want to shake his hand. "Things have been good. Things have been very busy, I'll tell you that" he replied. We took a seat in front of his desk, and began to discuss very important matters. A knock came on the door as a messenger ran, panting towards me. "You're requested... back at Frostaria... sir. It's important." Then, he ran off. "I'm sorry this meeting has to be cut short, but, I believe it's urgent. I'll schedule for another meeting" I said as I walked out. "What's going on, Chris?" Sky asked. "You never get called back to Frostaria unless something bad has happened" I said angrily. I walked out of the lobby, down the marble stairs, and towards the platform where my ship was parked. SlayerJones was waiting inside the ship, as he was the pilot. I climbed up the ladder, and headed directly to the cockpit. "Get to Frostaria, double time." I ordered. "Got it. Taking off in 10 seconds" replied Slayer as he started to flick switches and push buttons until we were finally in the air, in space, headed towards Frostaria. He flicked a couple of more switches, and pushed a button, and we were on our way towards Frostaria. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 2 to come out soon! :)
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Ryanr23
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| 02 Jun 2013 08:48 PM |
| How about you do your job instead of writing fan-fiction for a dying clan? |
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fabiao14
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| 02 Jun 2013 08:49 PM |
good job i like it.
~RAT Great Admiral; ☣-[[Chief of Warfare]]-☣~ |
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| 02 Jun 2013 08:52 PM |
well i'm sorry if i like to have fun every once in a while.
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sandgar
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| 02 Jun 2013 09:06 PM |
Gjgj!
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| 02 Jun 2013 09:31 PM |
@slayer
how do you fair evil twin. |
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| 03 Jun 2013 05:33 PM |
[CHAPTER 2]
Cj was strolling the halls of Sparrow Mansion, waiting for my arrival. Guards were positioned at every possible exit and entrance, to ensure that their leader was not killed. A messenger ran through the door, panting. "I'm so, so, sorry about this." he whispered as he opened up his coat. Explosives were revealed to be on his chest, and he pushed the button.
"Chris, you might want to take a look at this." said Slayer as he pointed out in the horizon, where a funnel of smoke was rising out of the mansion. "No.... NO." I shouted. Slayer landed on the landing pad, and I jumped down. I sprinted towards the mansion, to see many of the high ranks who were left alive. "What happened?" I asked. "We don't know... an explosion went off in the lobby while cj was taking a stroll. He's been confirmed dead." replied Moolego. I walked where the explosion was detonated. "Doesn't VAK use these kind of explosives?" I questioned Moolego. "Possibly. I haven't been in VAK for decades." replied Moolego. Helicopters flew over the scene. Then, troops in dark suits, with helmets covering their entire head, dropped down. I took out my revolver and began to fire at the troops. Medical staff were used as landing pads for the troops, as they came crashing to the ground. Moolego began to go one on one with one of the troops. Another was coming on his left. I shot the troop in the chest, and Moolego dealt with his trooper. Then, Moolego was shot in the back, and was kicked down to the ground. "Dmoney, we have to get out of here, now!" I shouted. "Slayer, immediate evac, now!" I shouted into my radio as I fired on the oncoming troops. My ship launched into the air. "Got it. I'm detect-" Slayer was cut off as a missile hit the ship in the cockpit. It burst into flames, and crashed into the ground with a fiery explosion. "No!" I shouted. "Chris, we have to go, NOW." Dmoney shouted as he was shot in the left shoulder and was flung to the ground. I fired my revolver and shot a troop in the head. I began to drag Dmoney's body behind some cover. "You'll be alright, we'll get out of this" I comforted Dmoney. He replied with a groan. "Dmoney, what is it?" I said. "Those... are.... VAK.... elites..." replied Dmoney with his last breath. I ran up the stairs of what remained of the Sparrow Mansion, and shot the nearest window, and took a leap of faith. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Chapter 3 coming out soon! |
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| 03 Jun 2013 06:16 PM |
| this is actually a very good story. well done. |
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| 03 Jun 2013 06:23 PM |
| Can I please be in your story? |
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tokwa45
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| 04 Jun 2013 12:37 AM |
| Would love if you commented what you think of the story. |
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lejam7890
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| 04 Jun 2013 12:48 AM |
| Wow pretty good. You should put more about Venezia. Maybe escape there? |
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628ninja
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| 04 Jun 2013 04:09 PM |
Great job, can't wait for Chapter 2
Join my primary kthxbai |
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| 04 Jun 2013 04:10 PM |
chapter 2 is already out.
lol.
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| 04 Jun 2013 04:10 PM |
so you're quitting rat
♜ ͡Just got star trekt |
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